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Mimithdino's application [Declined - Niko]

Mimithdino

Villager
1. What is your Minecraft username?
Mimithdino
2. How old are you?
15
3. What country are you from?
The United States of America
4. Have you read the King's Law, Code of Conducts, Official Lore, and the Player Guides yet?
Yes
5. In your own words, how would you define metagaming and powergaming?
Metagaming is when you use information that your character doesn't know in roleplay. Powergaming is when you force someone else's character to do something.
6. Do we allow X-Raying mods or X-Ray texture packs on the server?
No
7. Name one of our current Mentors.
Niko
8. Tell us about yourself!
I play the viola and percussion, I also participate in my schools model united nations and I was president of general assembly last year. I have three cats and they are the loves of my life. I prefer classical music and Vivaldi's four seasons is my favorite. I play a lot of Overwatch as well as league of legends. I'm also gay and participate in my schools G.S.A.
9. Do you have any examples of your work?
No
10. Did anyone refer you? If not, how did you find our server?
I was not refered by anyone.
About Your Character!
My character's name is Aldren Danderfield, a human born in Mockingbay. His family were butchers and they lived modestly in a home just outside the city. He grew up with several brothers and a sister, he and his brothers commonly went hunting for the meat while his parents and sister prepared and sold it but since he was the youngest he sometimes helped as well. Although his family wasn't so rich he still grew up attending dance classes and listening to the newest music in town. He now has moved out seeking fortune in the outside world. He has basic bow skills and some sword skills
Character Name:
Aldren Danderfield
Character Age:
19
Character Race:
Human
Appearance:
Brown hair, grey eyes, neutral eyes, and is commonly dressed in a brown cloak and undershirt.
(Optional) Picture of the Skin:
(Attach a picture here if you have one. If you don't have an image, that's fine. Just make sure you describe it well in the appearance section.)
Written Test!
It's the witching hour on a cold winters night and a man wearing a gash on his side gallops into Mockingbay seeking shelter from the cold. He's desperate looking for any shop that still has it's candles lit. He sees a butchers shop with a couple wrapping up cuts of meat in brown paper, the above the door reads Danderfield Butchers. He hops off his horse and stumbles inside, the couples head cocks over to see the man holding a bloody rag to his side. They rush over to his aide and the man quite a burly fellow lifts him onto the counter while the mother yells for her children saying "Maria! Aldren! Come here and bring the sewing kit"
Two children come rushing in on this gruesome both in their early teens but neither ready for the horror that they just entered, but they did their best. The boy goes to his father who tells him to apply pressure to the wound while the girl goes to her mother and begins to thread a needle with red string. The father brings out a bottle of liquor from the kitchen and douses the wound in the bitter liquid. The man winced in pain as we curled his back up, and then he fell back with a thud as he passed out from the pain. The mother began to stitch the gash, the daughter pushed the wound closed as she stitched. After she was done the father left into the back room and grabbed some bandages. He wrapped it around the man and sealed it onto his side. Then he said to Aldren his son to go tie his horse around back in the stables.
The boy left out for the back of the shop reins of the horse in hand, outside a blizzard was blazing only becoming worse as time passed. As the boy the tied the horse on post in the poorly composed wooden stables he head the crunching of snow behind him. He turned and asked who was there with no answer he left back into the shop. He told his father what had happened and he went out to look for himself, he came back having seen or heard nothing he shook it off as paranoia. "We're going home you will stay here and protect the shop from that mystery man you swear you saw." The father said not allowing his son to get a word in.
The boy went into the back of the store and grabbed his bow and a quiver of arrows, he took a stool from the kitchen and dragged it into the store front. He sat waiting, arrow in hand. Hours passed it was now nearly half passed four and Aldren was fast asleep, a man dressed in all black has snuck into the store, he holds a dagger curved to puncture the heart he stands over the man in cold fury he begins to whisper something into his ear. Suddenly Aldren is shaken awake by some miracle and sees the man laying over the strange man. He stands up silently and draws back his arrow and said "Who are you?" in and aggressive tone.
The man cocked his head to see the boy and backed away from the counter. In knowledge of his disadvantage he dropped the knife and fell to his knees, Aldren moved his foot and slid the knife over to him. "Now really who are, and why are you here?" Aldren demanded.
"My name is Douglas Berigan and I've been sent by the nobles of Altera to find and kill this man, He's stolen thousands of radiants from them and will only continue to steal more if I don't stop him." He said rising to his feet.
"How do you plan to stop him? I won't hand him over if your going to kill him." Aldren said picking up the curved dagger and throwing it into the kitchen.
The man began to fumble into his coat looking for something, he pulled out a piece of paper with an image of the mans face with several crimes listed below his name Arch Dalner, at the top a price of 15 thousand radiants for his arrest.
"See I'm going to turn him in alive to the authorities were they will deal with him. I don't know what they'll do but it is out of my control. Now let me take this fiend out of your life and into the dungeons of the nobility that he wronged" He said standing up.
"Fine, but you need to leave right now, and don't forget to take his horse that's out back." Aldren said backing and lowering his bow.
Then the man simply left the shop and never came back. Aldren tried to find out what happened but it seemed that both men fell of the edge of the earth that night. And that was just fine for Aldren as he and his family were safe and neither of them came back so no harm no foul.
 
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Niko

Lord of Altera
Good
Legend
SirNicholas14
SirNicholas14
Good
Hi there! Thank you for taking the time and effort to write your application to Hollowworld. There is one small issue with your application that needs to be rectified before we can move forward.

- Your test is good, but there are too many violent overtones. The last sentence especially conveys a good deal of edginess. I did however like how riveting and suspenseful the beginning and middle were. My issue is mostly with how the test ends.

Once again thank you for taking the time and effort to write this application. I look forward to reading this once more.
 

Mimithdino

Villager
1. What is your Minecraft username?
Mimithdino
2. How old are you?
15
3. What country are you from?
The United States of America
4. Have you read the King's Law, Code of Conducts, Official Lore, and the Player Guides yet?
Yes
5. In your own words, how would you define metagaming and powergaming?
Metagaming is when you use information that your character doesn't know in roleplay. Powergaming is when you force someone else's character to do something.
6. Do we allow X-Raying mods or X-Ray texture packs on the server?
No
7. Name one of our current Mentors.
Niko
8. Tell us about yourself!
I play the viola and percussion, I also participate in my schools model united nations and I was president of general assembly last year. I have three cats and they are the loves of my life. I prefer classical music and Vivaldi's four seasons is my favorite. I play a lot of Overwatch as well as league of legends. I'm also gay and participate in my schools G.S.A.
9. Do you have any examples of your work?
No
10. Did anyone refer you? If not, how did you find our server?
I was not refered by anyone.
About Your Character!
My character's name is Aldren Danderfield, a human born in Mockingbay. His family were butchers and they lived modestly in a home just outside the city. He grew up with several brothers and a sister, he and his brothers commonly went hunting for the meat while his parents and sister prepared and sold it but since he was the youngest he sometimes helped as well. Although his family wasn't so rich he still grew up attending dance classes and listening to the newest music in town. He now has moved out seeking fortune in the outside world. He has basic bow skills and some sword skills
Character Name:
Aldren Danderfield
Character Age:
19
Character Race:
Human
Appearance:
Brown hair, grey eyes, neutral eyes, and is commonly dressed in a brown cloak and undershirt.
(Optional) Picture of the Skin:
(Attach a picture here if you have one. If you don't have an image, that's fine. Just make sure you describe it well in the appearance section.)
Written Test!
It's the witching hour on a cold winters night and a man wearing a gash on his side gallops into Mockingbay seeking shelter from the cold. He's desperate looking for any shop that still has it's candles lit. He sees a butchers shop with a couple wrapping up cuts of meat in brown paper, the above the door reads Danderfield Butchers. He hops off his horse and stumbles inside, the couples head cocks over to see the man holding a bloody rag to his side. They rush over to his aide and the man quite a burly fellow lifts him onto the counter while the mother yells for her children saying "Maria! Aldren! Come here and bring the sewing kit"
Two children come rushing in on this gruesome both in their early teens but neither ready for the horror that they just entered, but they did their best. The boy goes to his father who tells him to apply pressure to the wound while the girl goes to her mother and begins to thread a needle with red string. The father brings out a bottle of liquor from the kitchen and douses the wound in the bitter liquid. The man winced in pain as we curled his back up, and then he fell back with a thud as he passed out from the pain. The mother began to stitch the gash, the daughter pushed the wound closed as she stitched. After she was done the father left into the back room and grabbed some bandages. He wrapped it around the man and sealed it onto his side. Then he said to Aldren his son to go tie his horse around back in the stables.
The boy left out for the back of the shop reins of the horse in hand, outside a blizzard was blazing only becoming worse as time passed. As the boy the tied the horse on post in the poorly composed wooden stables he head the crunching of snow behind him. He turned and asked who was there with no answer he left back into the shop. He told his father what had happened and he went out to look for himself, he came back having seen or heard nothing he shook it off as paranoia. "We're going home you will stay here and protect the shop from that mystery man you swear you saw." The father said not allowing his son to get a word in.
The boy went into the back of the store and grabbed his bow and a quiver of arrows, he took a stool from the kitchen and dragged it into the store front. He sat waiting, arrow in hand. Hours passed it was now nearly half passed four and Aldren was fast asleep, a man dressed in all black has snuck into the store, he holds a dagger curved to puncture the heart he stands over the man in cold fury he begins to whisper something into his ear. Suddenly Aldren is shaken awake by some miracle and sees the man laying over the strange man. He stands up silently and draws back his arrow and said "Who are you?" in and aggressive tone.
The man cocked his head to see the boy and backed away from the counter. In knowledge of his disadvantage he dropped the knife and fell to his knees, Aldren moved his foot and slid the knife over to him. "Now really who are, and why are you here?" Aldren demanded.
"My name is Douglas Berigan and I've been sent by the nobles of Altera to find and kill this man, He's stolen thousands of radiants from them and will only continue to steal more if I don't stop him." He said rising to his feet.
"How do you plan to stop him? I won't hand him over if your going to kill him." Aldren said picking up the curved dagger and throwing it into the kitchen.
The man began to fumble into his coat looking for something, he pulled out a piece of paper with an image of the mans face with several crimes listed below his name Arch Dalner, at the top a price of 15 thousand radiants for his arrest.
"See I'm going to turn him in alive to the authorities were they will deal with him. I don't know what they'll do but it is out of my control. Now let me take this fiend out of your life and into the dungeons of the nobility that he wronged" He said standing up.
"Fine, but you need to leave right now, and don't forget to take his horse that's out back." Aldren said backing and lowering his bow.
Then the man simply left the shop and never came back. Aldren tried to find out what happened but it seemed that both men fell of the edge of the earth that night. And that was just fine for Aldren as he and his family were safe and neither of them came back so no harm no foul.
 

Niko

Lord of Altera
Good
Legend
SirNicholas14
SirNicholas14
Good
Alright, I need you to incorporate the edits you made into your original application. You didn't need to rewrite the entire application or make a new thread. Could you put in your edits into your original? You can edit posts you make by clicking the "Edit" button in the bottom left hand corner of your posts. I'll deal with the other thread.
 

Niko

Lord of Altera
Good
Legend
SirNicholas14
SirNicholas14
Good
This application has been declined because it is redundant as a new application has taken its place.
 
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