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Creeper slayer -- Hoi

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Villager
Name: Hoi

Nickname/Alias: Hoi
Age: 21
Gender: male

Race: human
Height: average
Weight: avarage
Hair: brown/black
Eyes: blue, almost purple
Skin: tan like the most people
Identifying Marks: creeper skin on his back
Appearance: a strong looking guy, who is driven by revenge. he wears the standard outfit of his village - which is exterminated by creepers - with a creeper skin on his back.

-- CHAPTER 1 --
Year 1518, the Netherlands.

It's early in the morning. Everyone still sleeps in hoi's village. Everything is peaceful for now... but the people in hoi's village don't know that the creepers are planning an attack on his village.
A couple of hours later, the time has come! The creepers start attacking his village.

'Dad! Dad!!!! Wake up! The creepers are attacking our village!'

'WHAT?! We must defend our village!'

hoi's dad ran downstairs and grabbed his stone sword and left the house. Hoi wanted to help, but his mom stops him from running after his dad.

'Move! I'm gonna kill some creepers!'

'No son, it's way too dangerous for you to help. You're only 14'

'But mom!'

'I said no... go back to your room'

Hoi sauntered to his room and sat on his bed. He watched the fight from his room, through the window.
After a few hours of fighting, his mom came into his room.

'We need to evacuate the village, the warriors are losing! Follow me!'

But it was too late to evacuate. The creepers were already inside hoi's house...

'NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' screamed hoi's mom.

After the scream he heard a loud bang. He ran downstairs and saw a big gap in the house.

-- END PART 1 --

Hey, this was my first story EVER! I hope you guys enjoyed it.​
Don't forget to give me feedback :D
(btw I'm Dutch, so there may be some mistakes in the story)

 

Itzzaboy

King ForumStalker
Name: Hoi

Nickname/Alias: Hoi
Age: 21
Gender: male

Race: human
Height: average
Weight: avarage
Hair: brown/black
Eyes: blue, almost purple
Skin: tan like the most people
Identifying Marks: creeper skin on his back
Appearance: a strong looking guy, who is driven by revenge. he wears the standard outfit of his village - which is exterminated by creepers - with a creeper skin on his back.

-- CHAPTER 1 --
Year 1518, the Netherlands.

It's early in the morning. Everyone still sleeps in hoi's village. Everything is peaceful for now... but the people in hoi's village don't know that the creepers are planning an attack on his village.
A couple of hours later, the time has come! The creepers start attacking his village.

'Dad! Dad!!!! Wake up! The creepers are attacking our village!'

'WHAT?! We must defend our village!'

hoi's dad ran downstairs and grabbed his stone sword and left the house. Hoi wanted to help, but his mom stops him from running after his dad.

'Move! I'm gonna kill some creepers!'

'No son, it's way too dangerous for you to help. You're only 14'

'But mom!'

'I said no... go back to your room'

Hoi sauntered to his room and sat on his bed. He watched the fight from his room, through the window.
After a few hours of fighting, his mom came into his room.

'We need to evacuate the village, the warriors are losing! Follow me!'

But it was too late to evacuate. The creepers were already inside hoi's house...

'NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' screamed hoi's mom.

After the scream he heard a loud bang. He ran downstairs and saw a big gap in the house.

-- END PART 1 --

Hey, this was my first story EVER! I hope you guys enjoyed it.​
Don't forget to give me feedback :D
(btw I'm Dutch, so there may be some mistakes in the story)
Great story, but relating the real world to hollow world wont work (the netherlands isn't in hollowworld, make up a town if you don't want to use an existing one).

However, considering this is your first story, I have to say, this is great!
 

Auxilium

Cobblestone King
Great story, but relating the real world to hollow world wont work (the netherlands isn't in hollowworld, make up a town if you don't want to use an existing one).

However, considering this is your first story, I have to say, this is great!
Maybe he travelled to Altera in part 2 :O
(En hallo daar Nederlander ;))
 
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