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My application [Declined - Cukie1]

ramby2013

Villager
1. What is your Minecraft username?
Fantasydragon8
2. How old are you?
14

3. What country are you from?
America

4. Have you read the King's Law, Tome of Citizenship, Official Lore, and the Survival Guides yet?
Yes

5. In your own words, how would you define metagaming and powergaming?
Metagaming to me is bad because no one wants to play with a person who is super powerful. I don't like powergaming for that exact same reason.

6. Do we allow X-Raying mods or X-Ray texture packs on the server?
No.

7. Name one of our current Mentors.
Tempy_,223hero7,Cukie1. Mentors help beginning role players learn how to role play.

(Mentors are designed to help you get used to the server; you can a list of our current Mentors and what they can do for you under 'Everything you need to know!'.)
8. Tell us about yourself!
I have a mixed breed dog named Tessa, and a short haired cat named Fern. I love making cupcakes. I love to read books, I like the genres fantasy, historical, fiction. I love Celtic music and I have always wanted to learn how to play the bagpipes. I love the how to train your dragon movies and the show Race to the Edge.
(Introduce yourself! Tell us some of your hobbies, what kind of music you like, other games you play, maybe any pets you have. We're not asking for anything too personal, but we would like to get to know you a bit better to help the application and transition. This question needs to be a minimum of five sentences and not focused on Minecraft.)

9. Do you have any examples of your work?
(This question is optional! Are you an artist? A builder? A writer? If you want to show off some of your work, we'd love to see it! You can upload a file at the bottom of the page to attach some pictures if you like! If you don't have anything you want to show, that is perfectly fine. Don't worry.)

10. Did anyone refer you? If not, how did you find our server?
I looked you guys up on google.
(This question is also optional. If you were referred by someone, that person has a chance to get a referral reward.)
About Your Character!
This section is about the character you intend to use once you join the server.We ask that new players follow these guidelines during this portion of the application:
  • Characters begin with basic skills and gear. No advanced armor or weaponry. Skills and abilities are appropriate to a novice level. Skills should be learned through roleplay, not through backstory.
  • Characters fit the lore. If you choose to play as a Moor Elf, for example, we expect appearance and details to be fitting with base lore.
  • Characters cannot use magic in any way. The test itself should not mention magic either. HollowWorld uses a restricted magic system and it is only accessible to those who find and learn from a teacher in-game.
  • Tests should not be violent. No murder, killing, death, torture. In the past, 8 out of 10 applications featured characters fighting off bandits or slaying passersby. We don't want to see how well you can script a fight scene. We want to see how well you can tell a story, how well you can roleplay.
  • Be creative and be original. Do not use tests/characters whose home villages were burned, parents murdered, and then set off to be an orphan assassin. It has been done before. Please don't do it again.
  • Written portion of the test is required to be a 400 word minimum. If the test doesn't meet the minimum, Staff may ask you to extend the test before the application is considered.
You can remove the guidelines above when you're copy and pasting the application. The instructions above are for you to read and can be removed when applying.
Character Name: Eredyn IreSteel
(Be mindful of the Medieval Fantasy theme when choosing your name.)

Character Age: 14(Human Years) 140(Dwarf Years)
(Simple enough!)

Character Race: Dwarf
(Have a look through our Playable Races!)

Appearance: Pale red hair, blue eyes, fair skin.
(We just want to make sure things like hair color, eye color, skin color, and clothing is all fitting for the setting/lore we have.)

(Optional) Picture of the Skin:
(Attach a picture here if you have one. If you don't have an image, that's fine. Just make sure you describe it well in the appearance section.)

Written Test!
(This is where you tell us a story of your choosing! Be creative. It should be 400 words minimum and use the character you've created above. This is what we use to judge your ability as a roleplayer. Show us how much you've learned by reading our guides and lore. Include anything you think will impress us!)
Current Setting of the Server:

My life changed the day the Dethnals attacked.

It was my coronation day. The day I was to inherit the crown from my father.
My father and mother walked in to my room and I knew it was time.

When I walked into the Great Hall I saw our ceremony tapestries showing the achievements of our first king. I noticed the tables heaping high with food. There was a buzz in the room, one that was joyful and solemn. After the Royal Band played the anthem, I started my approach towards the throne where my parents where waiting. Immediately a hush fell over the room. Once I finally made it to my parents, my father removed his crown and said, " Eredyn, do you promise to lead, protect, and guide our people no matter what may come?" "I solemnly swear" Once the crown was placed on my head, people started clapping and shouting, " Long live Queen Eredyn!!" I thought to my self this day is one that I shall remember for ever. Then two arrows shot through the room piercing my parent's hearts. More arrows flew killing people. I drew my sword yelling to the guards to get everyone out. I knocked arrows away giving people time to run. Once everyone was gone I grabbed an arrow for inspection later. I ran out of the room and led my people down the mountain.
 

Cukie1

Essentially a Chihuahua
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Give me a moment to look over
 

Cukie1

Essentially a Chihuahua
Aware Single
Legend
Pronouns
She/Her
Cukie1
Cukie1
Single
Things to look over:
-metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect.
-140 is not equivalent to 14 human years
-no violence in the test
-do not claim royalty in the test. Dwarves have their hierarchy.
-test is short 232/400 words
-avoid cliches like the death of parents and bandits.
 

Cukie1

Essentially a Chihuahua
Aware Single
Legend
Pronouns
She/Her
Cukie1
Cukie1
Single
Declined for inactivity.
 
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