Tale of the Fire Demon

[Fyre_Demon]

Nickname/Alias: Dusk/Fyre Demon
Age: (Unknown)
Gender: Male
Height: Average
Weight: Light
Hair: Black
Eyes: Changing all the time
Skin: Pale

Identifying Marks: Dusk is blazing with fire

Appearance: Dusk appears to be made of fire, devouring all around him.

Dusk's Role: Dusk is a warrior/diplomat, sent to Altera to discuss political matters with the king, as well as help rid the land of evil.

Dusk's Dream: To become human, so people will stop being afraid and thinking he is evil, and so he can truly be with the one he loves.

Dusk's Fear: The evil monsters of the nether.

Dusk's Enemies: The king of the Nether, who's Throne sits in the middle of it, who is full of evil.

Dusk's Catchphrases:

''You die''

"Haha... What?"

"To be human... that is my wish."

How he arrived in hollow world:

Dusk was sent to hollow world for mainly diplomatic reasons, but also for secret personal reasons: to become human, rescue his love from the many thousands of slaves the king of lich's has stolen, and to prove to the world he is not evil.

 

[Itzzaboy]

nice, but a nice backstory would really help this, why is he a demon? why does he hate evil? I'd love to hear these things, please add, pwease? You can haz cookie?

 

[Fyre_Demon]

Why he is a Demon AND hates evil: Long ago, when Dusk was human, he lived in the kingdom on Guardia. Then, one day, as bright and sunny as any other, some mysterious people came to his village, their skin waxy, their eyes blacker than sin. They approached the guard house, and then transformed, into their true, demonic form, and proceeded to raze the village, out of spite. Dusk was watching, helpless, as they killed his friends, family, and loved ones. Except for one. His true love. After they finished with the village, they took her back to their king, the king of the nether, the Lich King. Finally, just for fun, they infected hum with their Demonic plague, turning him into a Demon, purely out of spite. Dusk realised he had no where to go, so he went, to live, in the Kingdom of Zeal, the kingdoms of magical creatures, where he became a diplomat, to make peace, and travel the world, searching, for a way to become human, and also, searching, for his lost love.

 

[Itzzaboy]

Why he is a Demon AND hates evil: Long ago, when Dusk was human, he lived in the kingdom on Guardia. Then, one day, as bright and sunny as any other, some mysterious people came to his village, their skin waxy, their eyes blacker than sin. They approached the guard house, and then transformed, into their true, demonic form, and proceeded to raze the village, out of spite. Dusk was watching, helpless, as they killed his friends, family, and loved ones. Except for one. His true love. After they finished with the village, they took her back to their king, the king of the nether, the Lich King. Finally, just for fun, they infected hum with their Demonic plague, turning him into a Demon, purely out of spite. Dusk realised he had no where to go, so he went, to live, in the Kingdom of Zeal, the kingdoms of magical creatures, where he became a diplomat, to make peace, and travel the world, searching, for a way to become human, and also, searching, for his lost love.

would have been better in a story form but thanks anyways ^_^

 

[Fyre_Demon]

eh, stories are overrated.

 

[Fyre_Demon]

Wait. Do I get whitelisted if X number of people approve of my story? I'm confused.

 

[Itzzaboy]

no but a story definatly helps, and there is no whitelist

 

[Fyre_Demon]

The Adventure time of Dusk in Zeal!

 

[Shadowsmalls]

Umm, The ruler of the Nether is Queen Grief.
it's pretty good, it would be better if you could flesh out the details a bit more.