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[bowduim400]

1. Your Minecraft username: bowduim400​

2. Age: 13​

3. Gender: im a male​

4. Country: The Netherlands in Europe​

5. Have you read the Tome of Citizenship or agree to do so before signing into Hollow World for the first time? Yes i have read the Tome and i totally agree with it.​

6. How do you feel about the 'roleplay' aspect of our server? Do you have any experience roleplaying?​

a)How do you personally feel about roleplaying both on our server and in general.​

I see roleplaying as that u and everyone else in the Server/Game or whatever work together to achieve high things to make you rise to the tope together with your friends. that is how i see roleplaying​

b)Do you have any experience roleplaying? For example playing popular role playing games such as Fable, Runescape and World of Warcraft.
Persionally i have played Runescape a long time. after about 2 year of playing runescape it became boring so i catched on playing RTS games now i met minecraft and wanna start roleplaying on minecraft.

7.Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, your interests / hobbies and why you are here in 8 sentences or more.​

Im Bow i Live in The netherlands in europe in a Tiny village. I live there with my Mother Sister my Dad and two animals (Cat and a Bunny Named Nikkie''Cat'' and Little Bear ''Bunny'').I love playing computer games like Minecraft (ofcourse) Total war Series and first person shooter games. Minecraft is of my best interest and i play it alot. My hobbies are Basketball and PLaying Computer games. On school i follow a study HAVO/VWO that is the one of the higest availible in Holland. Further is my village small and called Egmond-Binnen it has a famous Cloister. My intentions on this server is to make friends and build a flourishing village. Further i was planning to help lot of new people who are whitelisted to find there way around. and on the forums i wanted to make an example application to show what the mods like and dont like.​

8. If you have examples of your work please attached them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.​

im terribly sorry but i dont have any examples of my work. But to make sure the buildings i will make fit in the medieval theme i will get them checked by two different kings to make sure they will be good enough.​

9. Is there anything else you would like to share with us?​

(your answer)​

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10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xraying, xray texture packs or mods for locating ores) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?​

Yes im aware of that situation and will report anyone using it and will never use it personally.​

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11. How did you find out about our server? i was looking for a good roleplaying server i visited serveral but ale where rubbish so i found this one and im sure this one isnt rubbish.​

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12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)​

Yes i did sure i do im a supporter.​

This was my application hope u will like it.​

Kind Regards:​

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bowduim400 ​

 

[itsemiel]

Sorry, but you need to change a lot of this to make it a good application. It lacks good grammar and punctuation and it's very hard to read, because of all the useless boldness.

 

[Sodium]

Hey again, Bowduim - We already have a template with full explanations of the questions in the 'Guide to making your white-list application!' thread, and applicants should read through that thoroughly before completing their application if they are looking for support.

A white-list application is generally the first method of contact between the applicant and us as a community, although first impressions are never the ultimate decider, they still count for a lot. Having a pre-filled template encourages applicants to copy exactly what was written in the template and change certain words to make it fit themselves, and doesn't give us an accurate first impression of the applicant. We'd rather that people produced something from their own brains to see what they are capable of and whether they will fit into our server.

Thank you for putting the time and effort into making this but it really isn't required.