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Story Mel

Nymphadora

I think I might like it here
So I am making a story for fun. I am on chapter 5 but I wanted to show chapter 1 first.
Chapter one:

Life

“Beep,Beep,Beep.”

I grunt. Sleep, all a 15 year old girl needs is sleep ,not to get up at 5:30 every morning, I thought to myself.

I was about to fall back asleep when I hear my sister singing downstairs, “Sugar, 2 cups please, won’t you come and put it in this mixer.” Uhg, I thought why does Jenny have to bake her cake so early in the morning.

Jenny is my 20 year old sister who owns a bake shop, instead of going to college. Since she can’t find a place she is living with us. It’s okay that she lives with us it’s just we have to share a ROOM! I hate it. On weekends when I am trying to sleep she has to get up for work. Thats why I wake up at 5:30 every morning.

I pull the covers off and role out of bed. The darkness streams in through the blinds as I walk over to my closet. I get dressed and walk to my sisters pink side of the room to leave. Jenny and I cut the room in half to decorate it how we want. My side is blue and hers is pink with sparkles.

I walk downstairs to the smell of cake.

“Jen why do you have to make your cakes so early?” I grumble while grabbing a muffin. I sit down at the counter and all I smell is cake. It’s not a bad thing unless you smell it every morning.

“Mel” she says with a sigh “It’s the only time I have. With coming home from the bakery and taking online classes this is the only time I have.”

“Is mom at work already?” I ask while eating my muffin. She nods. I thought that means I am taking the bus. I walk to the fridge and see if she packed me lunch luckily she did. I put it on the counter .I look at the time, it is already 6:35. The bus comes at 6:45.

I say goodbye to Jenny and put my jacket on. I grab my backpack and run out the door.I run to the bus stop hoping to make it in time.

As I get there the bus is pulling up

I freeze. I remember my lunch.

So any suggestions? Also do you want to hear chapter 2? Also Mel is not the title does anyone have ideas for a title?
 
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Firegirl

Lord of Altera
I like that this is a slice of life, just remember that normally slices of life tend to be a bit. . .boring. Since all that happens is well, life! Maybe make it a bit more interesting?
 
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