shouter kidds app again but fixed

[shouter_kid]

1. Your Minecraft username: shouter_kid.​

2. Your real name:Ryan Coleman.​

3. Age:22​

4. Gender:male​

5. Country: Ireland

6. Have you read the Tome of Citizenshipor agree to do so before signing into Hollow World for the first time? I already have read it.​

7. How do you feel about the 'roleplay' aspect of our server? Do you have any experience roleplaying? I really would like to do roleplaying again like I did in fable. I hope you guys have skyrim and other stuff I am big into roleplaying games and other stuff which involves roleplaying. I really hope you guys like what I like so we can along together in the future so happy trails goodbye.

8. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, your interests / hobbies and why you are here in 8 sentences or more. Hello my name is ryan coleman. I am 22 years old my favorite hobbies are Basketball, Minecraft and having fun because I love to play games with people so I can socailize with them. We can have great fun while playing the game I would like to join a town with my new friend deddily. He is aweome and I would like to join his town. I hope I could be accepted. Well I suppose I will not.Im irish and you are all cool I hope I will get accepted I an be a real help to you all I was on loads of roleplaying servers and one server made me the king for no reason so I hope I will get accepted thank you for reading it.​

9. If you have examples of your work please attached them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video. No i have no work pictures right now.​

10. Is there anything else you wish to share with us? no I am fine.​

11. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense? Yes I knew so I will never ever hack. ​

12. How did you find out about our server? I found out by my friend.​

13. Have you voted for us? (Click Here) No I have not so sorry.​

 

[Deddily]

Better each time, Ryan, but I still don't think you read the guide to making a whitelist application.

 

[shouter_kid]

i did i swear by my life ok

 

[Deddily]

OK. Here's the bit you're forgetting:

8. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, your interests / hobbies and why you are here in 8 sentences or more.​

Many people fail to spot this part, so I'll put it in bold and underline it.​

in 8 sentences or more.​

Amazingly, very many people write it in less than 8 sentences, so we have to egg them on to write more, which is a pain. Make sure these aren't minimalist sentences like:​

"My name is Bob. I like Minecraft."​

Stuff like this means you won't be accepted, as it's minimalist and shows you have put no effort into your application.​

This section is one of the most important ones, as it tells us about yourself. This allows us as moderators to not only judge your application better, but lets us get to know you more so that you aren't a complete stranger to everyone, we can relate to you and get along better as a result.​

 

[Deddily]

That's just a cut and paste from the guide

 

[shouter_kid]

i did that so i could answer the questions better

 

[Deddily]

Nono, don't get me wrong, what you wrote is fine. I mean my post was a cut and paste to show you what part you missed. I didn't want anyone thinking I wrote it myself because then I would sound like I'm pretending to be a moderator.

 

[shouter_kid]

when would they look at my app if i get declined already does that mean that i will not get on the server

 

[Deddily]

Not if you put in a really good effort. Just hit the edit button and write as much as you can in 7 and 8. Make them see that you really want to join and that you don't rush things. Make them want to have you on the server.

 

[shouter_kid]

hey i edited it

 

[Deddily]

OK, you seem like a friendly guy and it looks like you're keen to get on the server. Now's the hard bit - you just have to wait a while (probably a few hours) for your application to be considered.

To any moderators reading this, I have been helping shouter_kid with his application, but I do not know him outside these forums. (I had to say that, Ryan, otherwise it sounds a bit like I'm the one introducing you to the server).

 

[shouter_kid]

hey its ok dude at least i have one friend already and mabye we can be in the same town