vFlyz1m whitelist application[Denied - Space]

[Simon]

1. Your Minecraft username: vFlyz1m​

2. Age:15​

3. Gender:Male​

4. Country:Sweden

5. Have you read the Tome of Citizenship or agree to do so before signing into Hollow World for the first time?yes indeed i do​

6. How do you feel about the 'roleplay' aspect of our server? Do you have any experience roleplaying? i have this is an element where i belong

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, your interests / hobbies and why you are here in 8 sentences or more. i am simon from sweden, i like computers and play minecraft alot, i am a redstone nerd and i love pvp. i am funny intressting and "special" (the retarded way) i speak perfect english and i would love to join this server.​

8. If you have examples of your work please attached them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video. no sorry, i can show some selfrepairing castles in game if you want me to ​

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us? i do not think so​

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense? is i do and i do not intend to use theese bad bad spells ​

11. How did you find out about our server? a friend told me about it​

12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here) Yes​

 

[Space3045]

I'm sorry but I don't know if this server is for you. I get the feelings from your applications that you are impatient and rush into things... since you haven't taken the time to simply sit down an write a well thought-out or succinct application. I'm sorry but I would decline this application. However, another moderator may allow you through. Feel free to try apply again!

 

[Simon]

i had no idea what more to type of, i do not like handing out too much info to every1 accept it and become my friend and ull get more info... what more do you want?

 

[Space3045]

Try improve your grammar and take your time when writing your next application. For question 6 try write about why you like role play, do you play any other role play games? What are your role playing experiences? In question 7 it asks for 8 sentences or more, write about what you do like sports and hobbies..
I really hope you do try again for whitelist, it seems like you could do better.