App for whitelist :) [Declined - Bellonthewise]

[daniel3131]

1. What is your minecraft username? daniel3131​

2. How old are you? 19 ​

3. What gender are you? Male! ^^,​

4. What country do you live in? Sweden!

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server? Yes, I do ! ​

5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game? Yes, I do sir ​

6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.​

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My character are born in this server / map. His name is daniel3131. He have grown very fast since he was born and he are also known as a fast learner. He never grief or steal other peoples items. If he does he will be banned from the Town. His mother and father taught him that he are not supposed to steal from anyone.

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.​

Hey everyone! I am Daniel and I come from Sweden. I live in a town called Alvesta. I am occupied with school and I finish the class next year Right now I am working for a computer office. We send and repair computers from different companies around the world. It's really fun to fix computers and send them back to the owners. And we also lease computers for 2 - 4 years depending on the deal.​

In my free time I play drums. I have done that since 6 years back and I practise alot to play very fast and irritate my parents at the sametime xD​

I really would like to join this server cause I love serious servers ​

That's me ​

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.​

Yes, I have. But I have never taken a photo or even recorded a movie ​

I hope this doesn't affect my app! ​

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?​

I will enjoy my stay at this server

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?​

Yes, I fully understand ^^,​

11. How did you find out about our server?​

Google

12. Have you voted for us? I will when I have recovered my password! ​

 

[Eric V]

Hi, your question 6 needs to be re-done, its an in-character introduction, that means it should flow better and be in first person, we should learn about your character while seeing how he acts

Besides that, you should edit your post and bold your questions and space out the questions and answers to make the application easier to read.