Blastmetal Application

[Blastmetal]

GAME OVER MHAP MHAP MHAAAAAAP!

 

[matyio]

Questions 6 and 7 need to be longer. Your username isn't a good rp name in your case. You also need to make both more in depth. Question six also needs to give us an insight from your characters point of view.

 

[Spiro]

.... And perhaps make the effort of writing you instead of u and making the "i"´s capital. Not that it is really important but it is more pleasing to the eye

 

[Blastmetal]

For the Ingame character I can understand that It needs more detail but for my RP name Its Ed I cant change that, If u want more detail at that I can put my last name with that but I dont see why that Is needed for u only wanted my real name. For my In-character description I will work on a better 1. So if u want me to put In my last name just for the lack of letters In my first name then I can understand.

 

[matyio]

No, we need to read what your character thinks of a situatuion. For example, if he found and injured dwarf, e would do something, and think something. It is those thoughts that really introduce us to your character.

 

[Blastmetal]

the page Is refreshed hope u like the story

 

[Tchel]

The story is a tad cliche... something/bandits/creepers destroyed everything I love story. Yours was a bit more open ended (as he doesn't know what happened to his family) but still I'd like to see a bit more originality.

 

[Blastmetal]

and i thought so hard of it snif*

but ok i will do my best again
But not now iv gtg to work soon so i cant reply a whole story.

 

[Blastmetal]

im so sorry i realy wanted to join but my life in real life i mean has taken a major turn around. Im going back to school and do a job during non school days so im not going to be able to play what so ever. So here by im declaring this page closed.

 

[SallyPirate]

Alright, I'll lock it then.