bleeder94 [Declined - Sally]

[bleeder94]

1.Bleeder94
2. 15
3.Female
4.USA
5a.Yes I do agree.
5b. Yes I do Agree.
6.My character is Ezio. He is a warrior, and will fight for the king. He is loyal, strong, smart, and cunning. However he is not prideful. Although, he is a warrior, he specializes in quiet and quick fights, but he will not kill when he doesn’t have to. He is also, a good-natured person that likes to simply be outside. He is a little social, but prefers to stay to his tasks.
7. I live in Colorado, and I would like to be a part of your community because, I love to RP. I like being able to be something else and get away from reality for a while, it’s fun being able to make a character that has your personality but is, at the same time, not you. I am an animal person. I love all animals. From spiders to sharks, I love to learn everything I can about them. I also draw comics. Right now, I am working on a new comic with a dragon named Chips!
8. I have my Carnival that I have been building, it is still a work in progress though.
I also have a story that I have been working on for quite a while: Threewolvesdreams.wordpress.com
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
I am a sociable person and I respect everyone.
10. Yes I am aware
11. I looked up “good RP servers for Minecraft” on google and read about this one.
12.Yes!

 

[Lizex]

Your answer to question 6 is a tad bit short. Your answer to question 7 is also a little short. If you could also follow the format and do it like v(see)v(below)v for all of it it may be easier for people to read.

question

answer

 

[Spark]

Question 6 will be an instant decline. Please think of something imaginative, a story about your own fictional character.

Question 7 needs to be a bit more structured. Try making your sentences flow instead of short 4 word sentences.

Once youve done this ill expand further

 

[SallyPirate]

I want to be nice about this, but I need to say this part bluntly: Be original!

Anyway, I'm going to decline this.