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Hawkreaper666's Application [Declined-Sally/Abbey]

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1. What is your minecraft username?
My Username is hawkreaper666
2. How old are you?
I am currently 14 years of age. That is age of my Character also by the way.
3. What gender are you?
I am a male.
4. What country do you live in?
I live in America

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
I agree to the Survival Guide Fully
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
I agree fully.
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
INTRO
My name is Jake. I was raised in a large Kingdom Adriethien Many miles from where I shall wish to be heading. I was taught to be a Royal Guard by my father. Who was old of age but was still as strong as a ox. He taught me how to maneuver successfully In full Iron armor and handle a sword as well as a swordsman. I strike to kill not wound. I am yet only Fourteen years of age but can take people that are twice my age. My main way of battle is to think ahead unlike how must just use brute force. That's how you get yourself killed, I was also taught proper grammar unlike most. I was taught how to read and write properly. My mother was a smart women, she was the Kings Main translator.
Start of Story.
One day I was training with my father when I heard swords smashing against each other. I tried to run to help but my father told me to grab my mother and my sword and Leave. As I ran to my mother I got a glimpse of one of the raiders, They were the Orcs and Elves. (We killed both of them they must have teamed up to kill us) I wanted to fight desperately but then I saw my father eyes they were flaming with the darkness of the depths of hell with hate, but there was also something else, something like sadness he must have knew he would not have survived the battle and I knew run. My Mother and I raced towards the woods, I made the mistake to turn around. the village was aflame and the worst part. My father laying on the ground a dagger in his leg, a arrow in his right arm, and one giant orc standing over head of him. I knew what would happen but I didn't want to watch, when I turned around I looked for my mother but to my surprise, a Elf has spotted her, and there was a arrow sticking out her back. The Elf was moving in for the kill with his dagger I quickly rushed and decapitated him with one strong and long swipe, He was dead. I ran crying through the woods holding my mothers hands I started out of no where my father jumped out of a spot of underbrush and told me to run as he started behind me.Woods and telling this story with my Parents to the Guards at the gates, trying to enter and find safety.

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
I am a hardcore gamer who loves really nice Role playing games. I like to put computers together and take them apart and resemble them. I have been playing minecraft since beginning of alpha mainly doing Role Playing mainly this same story. I find this story very interesting and a never ending way for it to roll out maybe I become the kings royal guard or maybe not being able to and having to leave again. I am still 14 and still have to go to school I don't have a problem with school more of people at school I am shy, so if you guys try to talk to me about personal stuff I may not answer. I play generally 5-7 hours a day, I know I have no life but what ever I don't have to worry about jobs or anything yet but when that comes up I will :D. I am great with redstone and have perfected the Portcullis (A working gate that allows people to pass).
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
I'm sorry I do not.
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
I really like minecraft, And this server seems very fun to play.
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
I think xray and stuff just ruin the game play of minecraft.
11. How did you find out about our server?
http://mcserverlist.net/servers/4db49e8285bbf81ad40005b3
12. Have you voted for us.
I have not but I could
 

SallyPirate

Lord of Altera
I don't like that you couldn't wait a few hours for a mod or admin to look at your application. Have some patience, some people wait for days.

Anyway, rewrite your RP introduction, if you took a look around here, making parents die and only YOUR character surviving is an overused and unoriginal story, and no, he can't be powerful enough to take someone down twice his size, that's not possible.

Also, orcs and elves wouldn't work together.. as far as I know, elves are too stuck up to work with ugly things.
 
He didn't take somone down twice his size, he killed a elf and his parents survived with him even though it didn't seem like his father did but somehow Not to reveal yet :D he survived

And sorry I deleted i forgot that I made it today I thought I made it yesterday I apologize.
 

SallyPirate

Lord of Altera
twice his age.. same diff. Logically a younger person will always be less skilled than someone older who went through the same training.
I'll put this as well as I can: You're applying to join a server where everyone has made their character backgrounds and they're all trying to get along in this world. If you come in saying "This happened, then this, btw, orcs (earthspawn!) and elves worked together to attack my FAMILY."
Anyone RPing as elves would be offended. Because as I said, elves wouldn't work together with anything ugly (pretty sure we have elves that don't even get along with humans) and I find it kind of amusing they're made out to be the bad guys when your characters family were the ones killing their kind.
 
Its not the same diffrence he was concetrating on my mother so didn't see me comming and they would work together when they have been living in the woods they havn't been with society and we have been hunting and killing elve/orcs for decades its in our nature. So maybe they got mad and decide to attack our kingdom and it wasn't just our family it was our whole kingdom a kingdom that thrived for houndreds of years.
 
My story is also slightly diffrent than all that I have seen almost none of them have both parents living and orcs and elves working together.
 
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