jamesyboy3 - application [Declined - Sally]

[jamesyboy3]

1. What is your minecraft username? jamesyboy3
2. How old are you? 14
3. What gender are you? male

4. What country do you live in? england

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server? yes
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game? yes
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction. I, jamesyboy3, was the youngest child of a small, poor family, having to fight for our food i was always in a poor condition, as i grew older, i matured and gained the abilities of crafting, survival and fighting, at the age of 14 i ran away from home, hiding on a slave boat heading to a distant land, to this day i am looking for work and a nice, friendly town to settle down in.

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are. my name is james (obviously) and to be honest i dont really have many interests, one of the main one is the army, i know alot about the army, the history of it and pretty much everything that went on. the main subjects i like in school are art and designing.
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video. i am currently working on a medieval village on singleplayer.

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us? not really (sorry)

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense? i am aware and promise not to use them

11. How did you find out about our server? i searched for a roleplay minecraft server on google

12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here) no but i will

 

[Lemon]

Although you don't have any interests, could you add more to question 7? It says 8 sentences or more. You could add ... Favourite games, what school subjects you do, what do you work as, how many people are in your family, do you have a pet? Etc...

 

[Frostyvamp]

Your Question 6 has a bit of work needed
-Your minecraft name does not have to be your character name, and in this case cannot be your character name, as it contains numbers etc. You could be called, for example, James *insert cool surname here*, which would still take inspiration from your username.
-The introduction as a whole should be longer and go into more detail about your character, and should be more than one sentence. Your current 1 sentence is actually what could be 3 sentences just joined together with commas

 

[SallyPirate]

Alright, I'm going to say this again.

If you apply again, would you please make a longer RP introduction? 6 is meant to prove how good you are at storytelling or rping and handling your character. Having it so short doesn't tell us much about your character, or how you write.

7 asks for 8 sentences or more, this is because we want to know the people on our server and prove they can listen by having 8 sentences or more. No one has to give personal information, but we all have far more to rant about than we realise, 7 can be a fun question if we really think about it.

Declined. If you fix up your application, feel free to apply again.