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KinzokuAkuma [Declined - Tywin]

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KinzokuAkuma

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1. What is your minecraft username?
KinzokuAkuma
2. How old are you?
16
3. What gender are you?
male
4. What country do you live in?
United States of America
5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
I do agree to reading the guide.
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
yes i do agree to consulting the tome before ever asking a question.
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
I have been trained since birth in the art of combat when his heart has always been in architecture. I loved studying the sleek design of building in secret knowing I would shame my family if I didn't become a fierce warrior like my ancestors.when I finished the harsh training I was a skilled warrior and architect. I have become an emerald knight like my father and a skilled architect also. I travel the land helping people in need, whether it is a place to live or to defend one from the retched griefers. when you see me, the emerald knight, you know you have help. I try to help all those in need for it is destined for me for I am the emerald knight.
7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
i love to design and build buildings. i am fascinated with the medieval and renaissance eras and would love to be apart with others who feels the same. i have always loved art and design. i plan to major in architecture when the time comes. i would like to be apart of this server for i love medieval era and architecture. I would love to be apart of the community. I plan to help the community be a greater success.
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
i'm sorry but i don't have any examples.
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
i am very honest and if i do something that offends someone i would do anything to make up for it. i treat people respectfully all the time.
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
yes
11. How did you find out about our server?
i found out by mcserver list.
12. Have you voted for us?
not yet but i will.
 

Eric V

Legend of Altera
your question 6, it switches between first and third person and doesn't make much sense, you should improve upon it

your question 7, is lower then the minimum and needs to be added to

you should space out and bold your questions and answers, make it overall cleaner looking.

As i said number 7 is under minimum, therefore application is incomplete and won't get accepted if it stays this way.
 

Satouroes

Loyal Servant of Altera
There isn't much character development. To RP you need to decide how your character thinks feels and how they would react to a situation. What are their hopes, fears strengths and weaknesses. You should try and develop your back story to have these elements. *Note this is only a suggestion, you may decide you want to include different things*
 

Tywin_Lannister

Lord of Casterly Rock
It's looking good but, please add more to question numbers 6 and 7. We are a close knit community and want to get to know you as a person. I would like to see more about you; hobbies, likes, dislikes, what are you studying, what do you want to do as a profession? Things of that nature. And remember, 8 sentences on number 7!
 
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