Moore505 [Declined - Tywin]

[Moore505]

1. What is your minecraft username?
Moore505
2. How old are you?
14
3. What gender are you?
Male
4. What country do you live in?
Canada (Quebec)

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.

Name: Frudalk
Nickname/Alias: -
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 6 feets
Weight: 240 lb
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Identifying Marks: Black long hair
Appearance: Normal, not fat, no muscles.
Weaknesses and fears: Not good in fight, don't like monsters
Religion and cults: Christian
Profession: Farmer

Frudalk is a peaceful man who helps the people as much as he can. His wife abandon him, so now he lives alone in his farm. He just wish to die in peace.

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.





I'm a young student of 14 years old, I'm not beginner at Minecraft but I don't have a lot of ecperience, so maybe I'll ask a bit of help in the game, but norally I'm ok. I do some RP in GTA 4, and now I try to do some RP in Minecraft. I work in a restaurant, and that's it !
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.

No, like I said I'm not the best in creativity for now in that game.

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
I like cars,
Also, my first language is french, so maybe sometimes I will search my words

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
yes

11. How did you find out about our server?

I search on MCSL

12. Have you voted for us?
Not now, I don't have an account, but I will !

 

[Frostyvamp]

Extend Question 6, a lot. This will help: http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?forums/character-creation-guide.184/
Edit: Question 7 must be at least 8 sentences long.

 

[Satouroes]

The religion refers to in game religions and Christianity isn't one of them (it's a fantasy server)
I'd also put your questions in bold to separate them from your answers, makes it look better.

 

[Moore505]

ok, but I'm not on the whitelist !

 

[Satouroes]

Because you haven't been accepted yet, and I can tell you now that unless you make the suggested changes in the above comments, you probably won't be accepted.

 

[BrannFlakes101]

Because you haven't been accepted yet, and I can tell you now that unless you make the suggested changes in the above comments, you probably won't be accepted.

I commented on my post a couple times to add things... I think mod's are thinking it's been reviewed. I don't wanna burden like "Review me, review me!" but I'm just making sure someone looked at my post. Haha -Brannflakes101 application

 

[Tywin_Lannister]

Ok.
1. You need to add more to your character's story, just a bit more in depth with it.
2. Christianity isn't a religon or cult in the world of Altera, so, either ditch it, or go and look up in the lore about the gods of this world and choose from there.
3. Add more to question 7! We are a close knit community and want to get to know you as a person. I would like to see more about you; hobbies, likes, dislikes, what are you studying, what do you want to do as a profession? Things of that nature.

Changes these and I will re-review this App. and guys, try to keep the messages down, I did look over this app a few times because so many people had already replied! But thank you for trying to help him.

 

[Tywin_Lannister]

I'm Declining this, due to lack of activity.