Nuko32 [Declined - Matto225]

[Nuko32]

Hi! I have re-write the application, because the another one was declined D: [Sorry for Pedobear profile's image LOL]

1. What is your minecraft username? Nuko32​

2. How old are you? I am 14 years old​

3. What gender are you? Male​

4. What country do you live in? In Italy!

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server? Yeah, sure!​

5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game? Yeah, I've read all of it!​

6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction. I am a thief, and also an assassin. I grow up in the Nether. After 17 years there, I've found a portal to the Overworld. I entered in the portal and I was teleported in an Island. I lived there for 2 years. Next, I built a boat and I sailed the entire ocean. So, I landed Hollow World! This is my story. ​

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are. I play Minecraft from the Alpha, I really like programming (Java, C++) and I like play eletric guitar ​

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video. Yes, I've uploaded it!​

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us? Not really LOL​

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense? Yeah, I know it.​

11. How did you find out about our server? MCSL ​

12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here) Sure! The server looks great!​

 

[Matto225]

Hi, I just read your previous application, and can't see much difference to it. I'm surprised Robin didn't point out that 7 is way too short, but can see that you probably don't understand that "In character introduction" means writing as if your RP character (this thief of yours) was telling us about himself.

However, if change isn't made to our standards, I will decline this application. So please, put some effort into it! The rewards are worth it!

Edit: By the way, instead of creating a new post or thread, click the edit button under you post up there! ^

 

[Nuko32]

Ok, I've update the application!

 

[Matto225]

Sorry, but I don't feel this is strong enough. You also didn't alter 7 to contain enough content

Declined

 

[Nuko32]

I've posted a new application, and changed the point 7, please I really want to join in this server!