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r3a9an96- Application [Declined - Shadow]

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r3a9an96

Loyal Servant of Altera
1. What is your minecraft username?
r3a9an96 My Skin --->RPG.png
2. How old are you?
16
3. What gender are you?
Female
4. What country do you live in?
USA
5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes, already have.
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes.
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
I stumble upon a forest, the sun just reaching it's apex. I look for food, I've been walking since before dawn to get here. Deer are abundant and I would like to eat a warm meal and refill my water-skin. I start into the edge of it, trees still thin. I pause every now and then, keeping watch for prey and predators. Finally, I catch sight of a deer. He's on a game trail, so I decide to follow him, hopefully to water. If not, I can always shoot him and look for water on my own. Eventually, I hear water. It sounds small, but definitely enough for me. The deer doesn't seem to be in any hurry, so I circle the deer to get to the stream and fill my water skin. Then, I head back toward the deer, a little ridge follows a straight line to the meadow where the deer is, so I scale it. I track the deer from along the ridge. Finally, I reach the point of the ridge, inside of a sort of stone circle, when the deer freezes.
I prepare my bow, stringing it quickly and taking a deep breath. I let the air out slowly, calming and focusing myself. I notch my arrow, the trademark eagle-feather up. Another breath as I pull back, the string to my cheek. I focus on the target, the deer is facing the trees in front of me, a tricky shot, but I can manage it. The string makes a slight twang as I release, my fingers simply slipping from the string as I release the rest of my breath. The arrow wobbles slightly, but flies true. It goes into the tiny slit of skin between it's shoulder and belly. I see it stagger, then crumple. I slide carefully down the slope, keeping an arrow ready in case of trouble. I nudge the deer over with my boot, a heart shot. The animal also seemed to have been hit in at least one lung.
I drag it back to the top of the ridge to clean it. After cleaning it, I hang its hide up and start a fire. The meat cooks quickly and I finish before the sun goes down, storing the rest of it in my pack. Then I lay down for sleep, "This was a good day, Stylus." I mumble to myself before drifting off.
(I hope that was good this time...)
7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You
do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
I enjoy Minecraft, of course, but I've always wanted to have quests and stuff in the game, then I found your site. I like to draw/create. I also like to explore. Building is one of my favorite
things. I would like to be part of your community because it has everything; you can build, fight, do everything that's possible in minecraft in one place. I have been looking for a server just
like this ever since I discovered servers.
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
OK. I don't know if they'll work this time, I'm posting from my iPod.
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
I've been on Silent79's server CWMGaming, Legendary Craft, quite a few actually. I was actually trying to make my own server, that's what the picture is of. Yes, I was on creative mode, but
Survival mode will just take longer. Thank you for giving me feedback, I hope I've corrected the problems.
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
Yes, I figured it was, and that's fine with me. I had to get my brother to get me my texture pack, I can't even get a dog mod. You don't have to worry about that from me.
11. How did you find out about our server?
I googled for a medieval rp server, yours sounded coolest.
12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)
No, I will after I investigate the actual server.
Creative Example:
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The path lights up, and the door opens. I used this example because I switched computers and lost all of my work on various survial games. On one of those I built an epic tree-castle, but no picture.
 

lovelorn

Loyal Servant of Altera
7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more.

you have 6 periods, and a couple are good and a couple are shoddy, add a few more pls ^^ it will speed up your app if you do it now before a mod asks for it
 

Matto225

The White Mage
Sorry, we mods/admins see an application with a high post count and assume thats due to another member of staff. Then there's cases such as these, in which we don't look at them, and your a very unhappy person.

As for your application, I think that overall it's brilliant BUT, as only lovelorn has pointed out, you need more depth to number 7. We'd like to know things outside of minecraft; e.g. hobbies, favourite films and why, pets, wierd quirks that you have, etc :)

Don't get me wrong though: this is a good app. It's just #7 is the most important, so please expand on it :)
 

Shadowsmalls

The Anime loving Brony
Due to her not being on for a week, and this not being updated, I think I'll decline this.
Please, feel free to re-apply, and I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
 
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