Reddsabre - Application. [Declined - Sally]

[Reddsabre]

1. What is your minecraft username?​

Reddsabre​

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2. How old are you?​

16​

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3. What gender are you?​

Male​

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4. What country do you live in?
United States

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server? ​

Yes​

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5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?​

Yes​

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6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.​

He took to the shadows at a young age. Not knowing how cruel the world really was like, being confined in the secluded fishing village he was from. After the local shelter closed down, he had no where else to go. He only knew of one thing, hiding. He would wander outside the walls of his small community, setting traps and creating refuges for his own personal use. But soon his life would take a spin. Hiding was no longer his option.

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.​

I have been gaming since I was roughly 6 years old. Starting out with Vanilla World of Warcraft, Which I played up until December of 2010. I bought minecraft in 2009(?)ish. I have been playing since then off and on every other day. I am a Football player, and a Wrestler for my local highschool. My intrests currently are Computer gaming and Lifting Weights. I am laid back and just enjoy gaming of all sorts.​

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8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.​

Nothing that I have made is over the top on this computer. But on my old one I have made decent structures. If I can find some images, I will share them.

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?​

Nothing that I haven't already.

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?​

Yes.

11. How did you find out about our server?​

Found it on MCServerlist.net.

12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)​

No, but I certainly will.​

 

[Satouroes]

Your character introduction doesn't actually introduce your character. Who is he, what is his name ect. I'd read this if I were you http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/how-to-make-a-good-character-introduction.14771/

You also need to add more to Q7 as a minimum of 8 sentences are required.

Good luck.

 

[matyio]

You need to refine, and increase the length of your character introduction, and please don't be someone who's parents died tragically so he wants vengeance, as that is a sure fire way to get declined. Follow the link satouroes posted to get more of an idea.

 

[SallyPirate]

I'm sorry, I'll have to decline this, no changes have been made.

However, if you wish to re-apply, read the above advice