richards213's whitelist application [Declined-Matto225]

[richards213]

1.Minecraft Username: richards213​

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2. Age: 14​

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3. Gender: Male​

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4. Country: United states​

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5. Accepting the rules: I have read through the rules a few times to double check so yes i agree to the terms.​

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6.Talk of role play: Usually when i play role play i like to play a series of parts. My most favorite thing to do is be a merchant and own a shop with friends and make a good amount of money. Then when i have gathered enough money i buy stuff that could help me in battles and i will go on many adventures and learn new things. I use to play on a server called Lord of The Craft but one of the people i met on there framed me and i ended up banned. I played a lot on the server so i have lots of role play practice and can carry threw just like i did before. Just letting you know i am serious about being framed, i like the server to much and didn't want to be banned. So after a while i stopped playing minecraft but then got back into it and started looking for a new role play server. Then i came across this server and just had to join.​

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7.Introducing myself: My name is Oscar and i love to play video games, i'm very artistic and i love to hang out with my friends and skateboard. I am great at role play and can keep a good attitude when things get hard or when i get angry. I'm some what mature but you cant except me to act like i'm a parent because i am 14. I have people who whine and i try and do my best on everything.​

8.Role play Character: I will probably be a merchant named Collin and i will live right next to my friend. I work all the time and prepare to go on long adventures and don't come back for weeks.

 

[Tomahawk777]

Hey richards213, nice that you want to join our minecraft comunity. To get accepted by the admins, here some tips:
1) Add the question and then answer them. Maybe you can also make the questions bold to make it easier to read.
2) At point 6 you should write a little character story, to show that you are able to roleplay.
3) At point 7 you need to write at least 8 sentences about yourself. Just give information about your favorite music, what do you think about Barak Obamas dog or stuff like that.
4) Please answer all questions ( you find them here: http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/guide-to-making-your-white-list-application.17/ )

Good luck and see you in-game
Tomahawk777 (Ulrych Lonmar)

 

[richards213]

Thank you for reading i hope you like my new changes.

 

[Tomahawk777]

You don't answer the questions 8 to 12.
And I think the roleplay question shall be a little character story (don't have to be your final character, just to show that you can make a roleplay character)

 

[Matto225]

You don't answer the questions 8 to 12.
And I think the roleplay question shall be a little character story (don't have to be your final character, just to show that you can make a roleplay character)

Spot on. Since this is a pretty good app, I will give you a final chance. Read what Ulrych wrote, follow it and if you have any questions to do with the questions we have posed feel free to ask

-Matt

 

[richards213]

I added in a character at the bottom and i might change it cause their are lots of diffrent things i like to do in role play.

 

[richards213]

Its not answering them i'm just explaining

 

[Matto225]

I added in a character at the bottom and i might change it cause their are lots of diffrent things i like to do in role play.

Look, the main issue is, you havent used the questions we provide for you. Go onto the link Ulrych (tomahawk) posted up there ^ and copy paste the questions through (with the questions themselves, not just the numbers) and answer them.

Final chance now

 

[richards213]

I put it in red letters its not exactly the question but its explaining what im saying and thats just another form of a question so its just nerrowing it down

 

[Matto225]

Declined

If you want to make another one, feel free. However, if you do, please include all the questions, in the format we provide you with

-Matt