Application - [Declined - Mikipowah]

[Mohammed_alasadi]

1. What is your minecraft username?​

XxDonxX​

2. How old are you?​

15​

3. What gender are you?​

Male​

4. What country do you live in?
UAE (United Arab Emiraties)

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?​

Yes I did and agree with it.​

5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?​

Yes I do.​

6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.​

-Don used to live in a peaceful town he was 6 years old with his parents his father was one of the nobles who was a man of honor and help other people until this day have come the nobles of the town planned a secret meeting to stop the invasion of invaders who where mean wanted to control the world for power and slavery they where rich for sure and had a plan for the secret meeting with the use of their money
The meeting took place outside of the town Don's father never left him alone he took him to the meeting with his mother as soon as the noble got togather started planing to stop the invaders something bad happened the invaders have known where the meeting was by paying one of the nobles some money to say where it is they attacked it killed manily everyone Don watched his father and mother die infront of him his father was telling him.
Dons father: dont worry you will get out of here alive dont worry son.
These was the last words Don heared from his father the murders have killed everyone they ignored him until one got back he wanted to kill him but one of the nobles runed in and got stab and helped Don by killing the murder until then Don was sad didnt know what to do He kept walking until he reached the river he saw a boat got in it 2 days later he fainted found wake up asked someone where the guy told him you are in port silver.​

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.​

My name is mohammed mustafa I live in UAE am kind of new to minecraft but learned alot been playing like 3 months - 4 months. My hobbies are swimming,football and gaming RP is something easy for me i used to run a clan in AOM(Age of mythology) which was for role play only then left it and join TOR was the best clan in AOM even done more role plays in another games like age of empiers 3 and more and am happy to find an role play server which is going to be very nice if i joined soz for short information i had another application but didnt work i dont know why i hope this one does and i will try my best to help in building and help other people.​

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.​

No.

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?​

Keep the good work watch some videos in youtube about your server its really nice

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?​

Yes

11. How did you find out about our server?​

Google and youtube

12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)​

For sure i did​

 

[shizzel2442]

Even though I don't have the power to white-list you, I should say that your application looks good enough, Except #6 of your application. I don't know whether or not it was an accident, our you are making it now, or you ignored it, but you NEED to have an r.p. introduction for your character for this server. R.p. is extremely crucial here, and is one of the major aspects of Hollowworld.

 

[Mohammed_alasadi]

Nope i just ignore it as i am an Arabian got confused about it if you can tell me more about it that would be a great help from you

 

[shizzel2442]

no offence but am an arabian i didnt understand it so if you tell me more about it sure i would say it

Oh ok, no offense taken. Your introduction is for your character on the server. Almost everyone on the server has a "r.p. character". These characters have their own unique stories to them, and make the server and the people on it unique and more alive. You don't have to write much, just a short "story" about your character on the server, and what makes him/her/it special. Of course, you can't be a god, invincible, or have unexplainable advantages over other people.

For more info on what your character can or cannot be, check here: (http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/creating-your-character-profile.816/)

If you're confused on what your character's introduction should be, look at some examples here: (http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?forums/character-profiles-journals.24/)

Also, you don't have to have "Name: John" or "Hair: Golden" or any sort of template in your introduction, you just need to make a quick intro to your character. Good luck with your r.p. story, It's late where I am, so I am going to sleep. Good luck with your application, and I hope I helped!

 

[Lee Williams]

You don't use your Minecraft name. You make up a name for your character and speak in first person. Also you can just click the edit button at the bottom of your post and add it to your original post.

 

[Mohammed_alasadi]

So did they accept my application?

 

[Lee Williams]

Not with an application like this they won't. You need to change it and they will let you know if you have been accepted or not.

 

[Mikipowah]

Declined - Regarding question 6, it needs a lot of improvement, also, everyone gets that kind of roleplaying background with bandits/dark mages killing your parents, i'd suggest you also get a different or more simple background story,

Regarding question7, we ask for at least 8 lines of text speaking about yourself, not for how long you've been playing minecraft or your point of view of the different clans in Age of Mythology, although having been the leader of one tells us about you, the rest was meaningless.
Instead, tell us about you, w

e are a close knit community and want to get to know you as a person. I would like to see more about you: your hobbies, likes, dislikes, what you are studying, what you want to do as a profession etc. Things of that nature.​