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Rufzeichen123' [Declined - Sally]

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1. What is your minecraft username?
Rufzeichen
2. How old are you?
26​
3. What gender are you?
Male​
4. What country do you live in?
Belgium
5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes, i already did.
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes, i already did.
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
Darrel Smith, a young man that had everything his hearth desires because his parents were nobles. He had money, women, he organized a lot of party's and drinked himself full of wine. He lived in a tiny village called Amberglenn. The people there were very friendly and everyone knew each other. Every morning started with everyone waking up, birds chilping, sheep blating, ... All was perfect. His father Dughan, wanted have Darrel go to a private teacher, the best in town, s Darrel could be a wise, strong nobleman, just as his father. But, Amberglenn had an enemy town called Stormshire. The town was pure evil, filled with barbarians, thiefs, murderers, and other sorts of people. Stormshire wanted to attack Amberglenn because Amberglenn has various of minerals and gold ores in the ground. The time had come that the two village's had to clash each other. The two village's prepared for the big battle, good versus evil, who would win? Stormshire had tough armor, sharp spears and thick shields. Amberglenn on the other hand has lighter armor but better weapons and more skilled men. The two armies marched to the battlefield, woman and children crying, afraid of losing their husbands and fathers. Archers of both towns started shooting randomly at the enemy, spearman rushed towards each other, catapults throwing big stones into the battlefield. The battle was quickly over... Sadly, Stormshire won the battle. Amberglenn didn't had any protection anymore. The army of Stormshire easily invaded the other town and started to execute the villagers, including Darrel's family. Darrel himself oversaw the battle and saw who won, and quickly rushed to the villagers and warned everyone, though the villagers laughed him away. They said : " Our trained army cannot be defeaten by that bunch of barbarians, dear boy!" But they were wrong.. All the villagers are all dead now... Accept for Darrel. He saw the battle and escped before the barbarians reached the village. He picked up a sword, some food and started walking randomly, crying about wat happened. He crossed desserts, and then finally reached a very beautifull and big town, Port Silver. He appeared before the council and they agreed for Darrel to stay. Darrel now settled down at the outskirts of Port Silver as a simple farmer.
7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
My name is Rob, i am 26 years old. I own a little carpenter's company wich do quitte good business. :D I have 1 kid named Ezra she is 3 years old. My interests are computer games, anything with wood, architectural stuff. I play a LOT of games wich involves Roleplay ; World of Warcraft, Runescape, Minecraft of course, ... I really wish to join your community because Minecraft is a game i really like to play because i can Roleplay, build anything i want. Especially the building i like, because i am architectural. I had Lungue-cancer a while ago, but that is all over now.
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
No, i am sorry.
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
I want to apoligige if you can't understand my English.
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
Yes.
11. How did you find out about our server?

The almghty Internet. :)
12. Have you voted for us?
Will !
 

Infernohawk

Lord of Altera
Hmmm... I like your writing style. However, we have faaaarrr to many people who use "My entire family/village was killed except for me" So if you could avoid using that type of story, I would love to approve it. Nothing tragic has to happen to your character to make them special, the way you play him makes him special.
 
What's wrong about it? Why do i hzve to change it? There are so many people with that story you say and they got approved... No offense though.
 

Lemon

Loyal Servant of Altera
Please do not complain when a mod / admin like inferno tells you to do something... It's not good on your reputation and its not good on your application.
 

SallyPirate

Lord of Altera
I know it's frustrating to change your story, and yes we've said that there are already a lot of stories like this, which is why we've started declining them. Because if everyone's town was attacked and everyone died except your character, it'd be a bit bizarre. Imagine sitting around a fire, talking in RP.

"My family and friends.. they all died when the bandits attacked! *sobs violently*"
"That's terrible, my family and friends and entire town were taken by a rival town! I was the only one to survive *sulks but is too manly to cry*
"My family as well! They died right in front of my eyes! The bandits killed everyone, but I hid under the porch and lived."
"... I'm a bandit *coughs*"
 

Somnastra

Puppycat Herder
Staff member
Admin
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Retired Owner
Somnastra
Somnastra
Good
:eek: *goes to rethink backstory*

Although, granted, I only have a dad dying from pesky bandits. They're like bunnies, you know.
 

Sassy

Lord of Altera
Legend
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SewSassy
Legend
I'm sorry, but The name "Darrel" made me think about this:
(Warning: Minor Language)
 

DavyITA

The Lioness of Davia
What's wrong about it? Why do i hzve to change it? There are so many people with that story you say and they got approved... No offense though.
Because it is an overused clichè.. and imagine a campfire, everyone telling his own story would be:
Villager A: "I come from this village "X" my family and all my friends were slain by "Y" and i am the only survivor, i am looking for revenge!"
Villager B: "That's exactly what happened to me!"
Villager C: "Same here, bro!" (i'm being silly here)
etc..
Don't you see how unlikely it is that every single one had his family\village\everyone he used to know slained and he was the only one who made it?

EDIT: *stumbles down his chair as he reads Sally's comment* xD
 

SallyPirate

Lord of Altera
This hasn't had any changes, and as it's been said, applications have been declined for having the "Everyone dies but me" story. So sorry, if you fix that up, you're free to apply again.
 
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