Doshyw - Application [Declined - Sally]

[Doshyw]

1. What is your minecraft username?
doshyw
2. How old are you?
I am not at liberty to answer that (a teenager)
3. What gender are you?
Male
4. What country do you live in?
Australia
5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes I do
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes I do
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
Hello there. My name is doshyw. I am just a common villager toiling everyday to harvest enough materials to keep myself alive and to sell. I'd really like to join this server.
7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
My name is doshyw. I am a teenage gamer who likes to play minecraft and mmos. I would like to be part of this community because it seems like a really cool server and the rules seem very fair and reasonable, prevent ing anyone trying to cheat.
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
Sorry, I don't have any examples on file.
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
No thank you.
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
Yes I am.
11. How did you find out about our server?
I found it on minestatus.com
12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)
Yes I have, but I forgot to put in my minecraft username so........ yeah

 

[Serah (Qri)]

Without an age, they cant accept it.

 

[Satouroes]

I really don't think age is the issue here. It says provide a lengthy character introduction. In an RP situation you really need to have a well developed character with strengths, weaknesses, hopes and fears. Giving two lines to a character back story isn't good enough. So try writing a proper back story and adding more to Q7 so we have a better idea of who you are. Finally I'd either space out your questions and answers or put your questions in bold as it looks more mature.

Try reading this http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/guide-to-making-your-white-list-application.17/

 

[Serah (Qri)]

I really don't think age is the issue here. It says provide a lengthy character introduction. In an RP situation you really need to have a well developed character with strengths, weaknesses, hopes and fears. Giving two lines to a character back story isn't good enough. So try writing a proper back story and adding more to Q7 so we have a better idea of who you are. Finally I'd either space out your questions and answers or put your questions in bold as it looks more mature.

Try reading this http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/guide-to-making-your-white-list-application.17/

Age is an issue. The server is PG13, so the admin/mods need to know the age.

 

[Satouroes]

Age is an issue. The server is PG13, so the admin/mods need to know the age.

I meant that yes the age needed to be added, but so did a lot of detail in the rest of the application. Sorry for the confusion.

 

[Matto225]

Yep, without your age, I cant accept this application.

Please extend questions 6 and 7! Question 7 should be about you, the kind of person you are and what you like, not why you want to join our server

 

[SallyPirate]

This hasn't been edited at all since it was posted. I'm going to decline, if you apply again, make sure to listen to everyone's advice and fix up your application.