moonshine_mans application [Declined - Tywin]

[OFWGKTA]

1. What is your minecraft username?

moonshine_man

2. How old are you?
15

3. What gender are you?

Male

4. What country do you live in?

United Kingdom

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?

I agree

5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?

I agree

6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.

A young hard worker willing to help anyone who needs help and willinng to adventure anywhere! Very good miner and extremelly friendly!

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.

My name is Kurtis i live in the south west of england i am very interested in Motocross and do it as a hobby. I have 2 sisters (both younger than me). Hollow World sounds like an extremelly friendly helpful server which i would most gladly be apart of! Thanks

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.

No im sorry

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?

Yes i am aware

11. How did you find out about our server?
My friend Lord_Abraham

 

[Somnastra]

1. Format: I recommend putting the questions in bold, so they don't all bleed together. This will make it easier for people to read the entire thing.

2. Question #6: the key word here is "lengthy." You have provided two sentences. And they imply that you are not clear about the "in-character" part of the question. Roleplaying is absolutely essential on this server, and if you don't know what it is, then it's probably not for you.

3. Re-read question #7. Follow the directions. Specifically concerning sentence count. If you don't, you will be declined.

 

[Lemon]

Well done somnasta, but just to go more in depht. 8 sentences or more for question 7, looks like you havn't put a lot of effort in your application. If you do not fix this, you will likely get declined.

 

[Somnastra]

Well done somnasta, but just to go more in depht. 8 sentences or more for question 7, looks like you havn't put a lot of effort in your application. If you do not fix this, you will likely get declined.

I guess I like my fantasy land where people can follow directions the first time.

 

[Tywin_Lannister]

I'm going to Decline this. You need to spend a lot more time on question 6 and 7, it really seems like you didn't care or anything. You need to go and read other applications that have been accepted and learn from them.. also, reading the questions thoroughly would help you as well.