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xDanPotx [Declined-Abbeyvie]

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xDanPotx

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1. What is your minecraft username?
xDanPotx
2. How old are you?
15
3. What gender are you?
male
4. What country do you live in?
England
5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
My character is an outcast elf from the deep depths of a dwarvern mine. The elf was an outcast due to his blue slime skin disease. However he now hides his corrupt face. He was called names. He was angry with his people and seeks a new place to live. He wishes to one day come back and bring rain of horror down on his people. He has escaped and wishes to learn dark ways. He has very eleven features, although he does not look like one he consists and learns the way of elven. Dark Elves look up to him due to his hatred on the dwarves and slimes.
He is corrupt and twisted now he likes to be hidden in dark areas to practice his dark magic. He was once spirit blessed but now training to become Darkblood, his dreams consist on killing his people he needs to be kept alone. He travels new areas to find items of death and destruction. He takes souls of people that get in his way. He may seem like a harmless slime but he is dangerous and not the one to mess with.
He has pinpoint accuracy with his bow and hunts at night, sometime he hunts Dwarves, as a sign of revenge to send back to his people. Dwarves are intimidated by him and fear him the call him Xei, in dwarven that means "Devil". He as become so corrupt his heart his black and does not beat his body runs on hatred and revenge. He prays under the dark star and sees his 1 fear, himself.
He comes across this new land which he cannot enter. You decide his fate weather or not he may enter this new world...
7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
I like turtles. No i really enjoy playing minecraft and wish to be apart of this great comunity. I like making videos and if this server is fast i will really enjoy making rpg videos for this server. I like heavy metal. I enjoy playing on my xbox. I enjoy basketball. I am currently going into year 11 of secondary school, and dreading some of my GCSE's results. I hope to be a Quantity Surveyor whem im older. I recently got a new computer, mini mac from creating a website. I dont like people that ask too much from you and like to take things easy and get on with what i want to do. I like people that are able to get on with people and dont piss them off.
8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
no sorry
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
The cake is a lie. My skin will change appropriately when i am accepted. The reason being is that i have a signature skin that i am using in my minecraft lets plays, survival island.
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
Yes
11. How did you find out about our server?
I was searching on google 'Minecarft RPG server UK'
12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)
No But as soon as whitelisted i will indeed.
 

abbeyvie

Lord of Altera
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abbeyvie
abbeyvie
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Declined - You still haven't changed your character from the slime to something from the lore, as SparkInSpace has listed. Also your red font burns my eyes... :confused:
Please reapply and read through The Core Races.
Thanks -
Abbey
All you read was that the red font burns my eyes...
Fix it please.

Pending.
 

abbeyvie

Lord of Altera
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abbeyvie
abbeyvie
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Its blue font for me :p... As soon as im accepted u can check my skin it will be changed
Not exactly what I'm askin', sweetheart. You're RP character intro is completely wrong. What I'm repeating for the third time is you cannot be a slime. You have to choose a race from the Core Races. It isn't the skin that is the problem. You continue to say you are a slime. Until you get the character intro correct.. I'm going to keep declining. :) Please rewrite your character intro.
 

abbeyvie

Lord of Altera
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abbeyvie
abbeyvie
Legend
You're eager aren't you. I'm going to need another's opinion before I finish this. Please wait.
 

xDanPotx

Villager
ok :D its just ive been searching for a good rpg sever and this seems exciting because i have to make an intro for my character :D
 

Valonyx

Lord of Altera
i'll say the same comment i post on almost all the applications i see. >:3

Take your time!

It will always work if you put imagination and work in your inscription, we wish to know you!
 
Can you please add more to Q7, the minimun is 8 sentences. The things in it should not contain minecraft related stuff unless you already have more then 8 sentences c:
 

SallyPirate

Lord of Altera
Okay. Lemme see if I can get this point across.
You can't make up something to make your character look like a slime. You come into the world as a slime and it'll make people angry, and mods will most likely have to kick or warn you to change it.
This is a medieval fantasy roleplay server. Medieval means that we don't have modern clothes (the horror!) and fantasy does mean that things don't follow the norm but! we did have to organise races and traits so people don't make their own races/traits/powers.

Your character wishing to get revenge is a bad character trait. It's not even a trait, take away the blue skin (seriously, no blue skin. No. Not ever.) and the part about people being disgusted about his looks are gone, let me walk you through this process as well as I can.

Personality is the most important trait of your character.

Looks can be the first thing planned, in fact I love coming up with characters and then figuring out what they do and how they think, sometimes I redesign them completely to match the personality. Figure out how your character works, does he have a nervous habit, does he hate certain things, and why? (and PLEASE don't make some dramatic story to make him hate something or promising revenge, it might get declined)

Think about power too, if you get accepted, you'll join a land of heaps of different people already working to get along. If you walk in and start going "Hey I can summon bolts of lightning just by waving my hand." Then people will either ignore you, walk away, or try to kill you. Because that's not how it works here. There's no strongest player, and magic is a limited power.

The end.
 

xDanPotx

Villager
If you read it properly i said he hides his face, he isn't a slime but and elf but has a disease however his face is hidden. My skin will be changed but atm it is a slime as thats my signature skin and is being used for something else. Please read my application properly.
 

abbeyvie

Lord of Altera
Legend
abbeyvie
abbeyvie
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*facepalm* Let me make this clear, you do not have to change your skin right this second. You only need to when you log into the sever. We just want you to not have ANY BLUE SLIME SKIN DIESE. We want to know your character's perspective, and or personality. We want history, not vengeance.

Now I suggest you not to tell the staff they read your app wrong. Please reapply stating what we asked for.

Declined.
 
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