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GhostKairo123's Reapplication [Approved-Alpha]

GhostKairo

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1. What is your minecraft username?
GhostKairo123

2. How old are you?
13 yrs

3. What gender are you?
Male

4. What country do you live in?
Canada

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes.

5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes.

6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
Hello, my name is Kairo. My family isn't that rich so I came to this wonderful realm where I could start from scratch. I know coming to the world of Altera was a good choice so I hope I might someday bring my family here into this prosperous land. I have learned the way of the Hunter from my father. I am a skilled warrior, I could survive in the wild with just my wits and strength. The town I used to live in has been reduced to a tiny little village. It has been raided by an army of Skeletal Warriors, they have killed so many people and destroyed so many houses. My parents and I have fought off some of them, and then helped clean the mess. We cleaned up all of the rubble and fixed the damaged buildings. We built a huge grave yard for those who didn't make it. Two years later...I didn't want something like another enemy attack to happen again. So I decided to ask my Dad... " Father, I want to become a knight. I want to protect the town and its people." Dad looked at me as if deciding to say yes or no. "Fine, but I am not the person to teach you the ways of the Warrior, it is not my style. Go two doors down and ask for Master Magnus, he will teach you want you need to learn. So I did as he said and went to Master Magnus. I asked to accept me as an apprentice. Fortunately he said yes. He took me to an island on a sailboat and we trained there. In such short he was like a second father to me. He was so kind, gentle, smart and wise.
One night we climbed a mountain and camped there. Then he started telling me about the good times he had with my Dad. Then he told me a shocking secret..." Your father was a good person, but he was also a Lycan, he never told anyone besides me in fear averyone would hate him and banish him from the town. And later in the years, he married your beautiful mother. And because of her kind attitude he had the strenght to keep control of his Lycan curse. And when you came into the world, I was so proud of them. But you somehow inherited the the Lucan curse from your father, but you also got to keep control of your curse. You Lycan powers only awaken as you get really enraged. It's a good thing, you know. Some day it will help you greatly..." " By the way, why exactly do you want yo become a Knight? " He asked. "So I can someday bring you and my family to a place where life will be easier, nicer and more sympathetic." I answered. He looked at me with a grin on his face. Then spoke " That's nice. Here, take this map and go to the realm of Altera, there you will accomplish your objective. Live, work, earn money and bring us to that wonderful realm." I did as he said and ran off to Altera. Magnus had warned so e of his friends at Altera that I was coming there. Most of them didn't believe him. So they spread a rumor that I probably died of hunger or by a bandit. So that's how got my nickname: Ghost... Now I try my best to fit with the others because of my curse, knowing I'm a Lycan, anyone but a fool would think twice before being my friend. My goals are to fight for peace, get money, bring my family and friends to Altera, and live well. Lately I've been making plans for what I should do first when I get in Altera, I was thinking I should gather up some friends and make a clan or something. I'm not sure...Well, as long as I have fun in life!

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.
I like to be with other people and have fun with them. I'm a nice guy who likes being social and wants to make friendships. I like drawing, reading, playing video games AND sports such as Minecraft, soccer, Spiral Knights, dodge ball etc. I also like to play the piano, I like to listen some music, but not any specific type. I do not like when people start trolling me a lot when I say to stop ( unless we play a trolling contest lol) or when they start bullying me with no reason. I have a really big imagination and I like sharing it with other people,I like to CO-OP with other people and friends when I play my games ,also I like to RP a lot because....That's my thing. So that is probably why I like Hollow World so much. That is it for about me.

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
No I do not have anything to share.

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
I look forward to playing with you guys and girls cause I like to play in groups. Hoping I will be able to join one.

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
Yes, I am aware about these rules and I really hate illegal griefers and thieves.

11. How did you find out about our server?
I do not remember. But I think it was on a minecraft server site.

12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)
Not yet, but I will once I'll join.

Hope you accept me this time!

-Kairo
 

Alpha

The Watcher
People are not related to gods, it doesn't work like that.

Alteration, what is this place?

A lot more thought needs to go into your backstory as I jsut doesn't make sense, it jumps back and forth from plot point more than game of thrones, only less thrilling.

If you wanted to do something like that you should have gone...

"And Rafiele hummed quietly to himself as he wrapped a soft wet cloth around his right hand to quell the heat of the flames flickering in the oven so as not to burn his hand when he retrieved the loaf of bread he was cooking. As he placed the sweet smelling baked bread on the simple table in the centre of his kitchen he sighed to himself and wiped his forehead, pausing for a moment before he strode to the entry way of his hovel and drew his broadsword from the doorway.


With a mighty kick and a blood curdling scream Rafiele leapt forth from his home and into the battle field outside where steel clashed and demons flew overhead, just another day..."
 

GhostKairo

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Thanks for reading my application.

As for Alteration, it was supposed to be "Altera", but since I was on my iPad, it corrected the word.

As for the backstory, I read that this is just a RP character introduction, not a back story.
If I'm wrong tell me.
 

Alpha

The Watcher
You fixed one problem out of the three I pointed out.
And you should put pride into any form of writing you do not just believe you can get by on the bare minimum just because you think that's all you have to do, this is a role play server do you not think that the role play portion of your application should be one of the most dominant? Not just four lines of "I did this" and "I did that"
 
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