KingFeather's Whitelist Application [Approved-Abbeyvie]

[KingFeather]

1. What is your minecraft username?
KingFeather
2. How old are you?
14
3. What gender are you?
male
4. What country do you live in?
Canada
5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server?
Yes
5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?
Yes
6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.
People are stupid.... They are completely content with life, they don't see the issues enough to understand that they should be doing something, luckily that's where I come in. I am the one to keep back the evils so that they don't get too powerful. But the catch is that it takes them getting strong for people to understand that they are there. I must prevent this from happening for I know what the true feeling of pure terror and fear is. I will stop these evils and prevent innocent people from living a life of paranoia and fear. Stop a life of always checking your back and hiding.

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want
to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.

My name is Teo
I am a hardcore gamer, and am somewhat active. I take part in school sports like volleyball and badminton. As a hobby I shoot archery at a local range and am quite skilled. I am in grade nine and have started what i assume to be a horrible school year from what I've learned so far, seems like to much math for me, ( 5 periods in a row). I hope to be a long time player in this server because I really like roleplay servers of any kind.

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.
None of my work is online but i helped my friend make some sweet areas on one of his servers.
9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?
Redstone is a LARGE weakness
10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?
Yes
11. How did you find out about our server?
Friends (minez2000)
12. Have you voted for us? (Click Here)
Yes

 

[abbeyvie]

#6:
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?...en-in-character-and-a-background-story.15470/

#7:
The grammar failure burns!! Correct grammar and a little more for it please..

~Pending

 

[KingFeather]

#6:
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?...en-in-character-and-a-background-story.15470/

#7:
The grammar failure burns!! Correct grammar and a little more for it please..

~Pending

Is this better? I understand what you were saying.

 

[abbeyvie]

Is this better? I understand what you were saying.

The grammar makes it understandable,but #6 is still hard to discover how you play your character. You given no opinion or emotion from your character, and you have used the death of your parents as well.. Dead parents are oh so common.. Could you possibly remove the "background," and replace it with maybe an opinion of life, or view of others.. Maybe the perspective of being raised as a [insert profession here].

 

[KingFeather]

The grammar makes it understandable,but #6 is still hard to discover how you play your character. You given no opinion or emotion from your character, and you have used the death of your parents as well.. Dead parents are oh so common.. Could you possibly remove the "background," and replace it with maybe an opinion of life, or view of others.. Maybe the perspective of being raised as a [insert profession here].

Ok. I appreciate the help

 

[KingFeather]

The grammar makes it understandable,but #6 is still hard to discover how you play your character. You given no opinion or emotion from your character, and you have used the death of your parents as well.. Dead parents are oh so common.. Could you possibly remove the "background," and replace it with maybe an opinion of life, or view of others.. Maybe the perspective of being raised as a [insert profession here].

Any better?

 

[abbeyvie]

Greetings,

I'm pleased to announce your application has been approved. I hope you enjoy your stay in Altera. Before logging on make sure you read the Survival Guide. It will help you on your way to get established in our World. If you need to know any additional information, everything can be found in our Tome of Citizenship and our Everything you need to know page. Make sure you consult either of these three before asking a question ingame.

Lastly, please make sure you understand the following points. It's very important. As a new player, once you play you may be tempted to "test" out an x-ray mod... don't do it! We have a zero tolerance policy for both xraying, stealing and griefing.
1) We have active members of staff monitoring players suspected of using X-RAY. We have extensive logging capabilities which also highlight to us when X-RAY is suspected. Anyone caught using X-RAY mods or Transparent Texture Packs will be permanently banned without appeal.
2) Anyone found to be griefing our server and subsequently blaming their sibling, friend, dog or any other person other than themselves will be banned irrespective of their innocence.
~ I'll whitelist you ASAP.