RP Profile for Anton(5556) Haldan Hjorvard

[anton5556]

Name: Anton Haldan Hjorvard
Nickname/Alias: Haldan
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Height: 192 cm
Weight: 89 kg
Hair: Blond
Eyes: Blue
Skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/207053/skyrim-adventurer/
Identifying Marks: if you look on his back you can se two scars from the zombie attack.
Appearance: leather armor,
Strengths: Good at forming new friendships, good whith trade and have the the strength of thor, while others do not like cold places and would rather stay in a nice
Oak Forest,Haldan would rather be in the cold parts a Altera.

Weaknesses and fears: love and women is his weaknessses. SPINDER! SPIDERS! he HATE spiders, but he will face them in war if he must.
Religion and cults: He's not a religious person, but his old tribe believed in the old gods,
Profession: Trade, hunter and building

 

[abbeyvie]

Typically using the race "Nord," or any race from Skyrim is frowned upon. You are using "foreign terms" to Altera, for we here do not understand what a "Nord" is. Plus, your skin does not even match up to how you are describing your character. You say you have blonde-hair and blue eyes, but your skins appears to speak on other terms. Now instead of using "Nord" how about "Human" and to keep the "resistance to cold" just say "your body is broad and built for colder harsher climates, for you were raised up in the colder places". Now just to give you some help I'm going to link you to threads for making characters, and collecting skins and such.

Creating a character:
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?forums/character-creation-guide.184/
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/how-to-write-a-character-profile.4435/page-2#post-136728

Skins:
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/selling-skins-on-request.14131/page-5#post-149898
(Or you could just ask me)

Good Profiles:
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/beauty-of-the-ocean-bewpys-profile.5143/
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/basil-brush-saeradan.14252/
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/abbey-mirabelle-oceana-the-mermaids-story.11422/
http://hollowworld.co.uk/index.php?threads/the-life-and-death-of-bane-argon.13817/#post-147106

 

[anton5556]

ops linked the wrong picture,
http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/210596/nord/

 

[abbeyvie]

ops linked the wrong picture,
http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/210596/nord/

Although the skin is better, I would still recommend removing all Skyrim references. We have a lore to follow, so please do look at "The Player's Handbook." There are so many options to add to your character from the list the server has. You could be a priest for a god or goddess, be a wary traveler whose was abused as a child, or even being a young mage under the teachings of Sir Bellon. Just take a look at other characters, and see how you could interact. Please don't just say "I'm a Nord/Human from Skyrim." I'm still wondering how this character got passed the moderator.