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(updated journal) Sventar Tokeq

toughguyrm

Loyal Servant of Altera
Name: Sventar Tokeq

Nickname/Alias: Sev and Senth
Age: Unkown, however he appears twenty one or so.
Gender: M
Height: 6"4
Weight: 130 pounds
Hair: Short, Dark Brown
Eyes: Dark Blue
Skin: Pale White
Fears: Sev usually fears nothing of the normal. His deepest fear how ever, is the reminder of his lost family. Other fears are the nether and dungeons (part of a background not on this profile, you will have to rp with me to figure it out)
Identifying Marks: A Scar on his forehead (hidden by robe)
Appearance: He wars a white robe with a black mouth mask, always carrying his dagger with him.
Info: Not much is known of Sev. Many legends and stories muck around about him, but no one deems it true or false. Some citizens however say he is associated with The Brotherhood
Background: Sventar Tokeq did not always have the name Sventar Tokeq. As a boy he lived his life with a different name. His family had given him away as an infant to a guild for homeless children. There he spent his days in poverty in a city of which he did not even know the name of. When he turned into a teenager, the guild fell into ruins because of poverty. He was left to die on the streets. One day, a boat heading to an unknown nation was about to leave. Sev hopped on it, hidden, and traveled to unknown lands. When he arrived, his first question was "What town are you joining?"
He picked the town "Dust Wood" and followed the path to it. He opened up a small shop for people to come buy resources. How ever, he did not get them alone. He would sneak out at night and steal crops and food and blocks all through until morning. Then a week later put them up for sale. He became known as "The Thief" during those times. When his shop was brutally destroyed by the mayor of the town (reason unknown), he literally destroyed the town into crumbling bits in one night. However, due to his young age, he was simply banished from the kingdom. At this point he headed out North. He learned to fend for himself to get food and shelter and keep warm. He then came accross another growing Nation. Here in the Kingdom of Solarix he was given the oppurtunity to start his own town. He became known as The Mayor of Kionti. Eventually through dedication of other citizens, it became a Nation. The Nation of Concension. How ever, greed grew in these lands. A man known as Yuro set out to make his own town. He eventually even overthrew Sev and left him nowhere. Sev traveled to the lands of the unknown, but still within the Kingdom. He came accross a portal. Entering it he had came accross the nether. Here he suffered for countless decades, tormented so much his skin became blood red like a Hell Spawns. When he finally escaped from the nether, a mage helped him. He took all of his Draconic features and put them into one hidden scar on his forehead. The mage however had to make many sacrifices to be able to take all of the hellish features out of him. The mage may have had great power but this power drained when trying to accomplish such a task. Sventar knew of the Red Death and that Skraag would come back for his soul soon. The mage looked at Sventar, knowing that he did not have enough power to be able to do such a thing again. The mage called together the sisterhood from which they gathered around the altar of Harateth. The old and wise mage knew he did not have much time left in this world, so he made the greatest sacrifice of all. He told the sisterhood to take the powers out of him and place them into Sventar. Sventar refused to take such power after all the mage done for him, but the mage insisted. With the mages dieing breath his power was pulled out of him. Sventar rose into the air and his eyes turned a holy white, his blood stopped pumping, and he obtained many of the holy powers of that the mage possesed. Sventar never forgot the brave and noble mage... but he regreted being the cause of his death for the rest of his life. At this point, he set out to make a guild, the Brotherhood. This guild's goal was to assure that no man would ever suffer the indignity he did. His guild traveled to the town of Aspendale to protect it from the harrasment of the barbarians. Soon after the Barbarians were rid of the face of the earth, the guild further moved onto joining the town of Ascension Heights, and also gaining the support of the Skull Kingdom.
 

Megan

Sorrows Warrior
put back into approval process as he edited and changed the story after approval
 

Megan

Sorrows Warrior
Those abilities were clearly added after the approval simply to get those abilities. They make no sense with any demonic powers whatsoever and have no description. You edited the post after I had approved and your friend told you how he got special abilities. I am going to let you roleplay as who you were before, It was enough then and it is enough now. You try to cheat me and this is what you get. Your old profile was wonderful.

There are to be No granted abilities above this post.
 

Karasu1996

Lord of Altera
Those abilities were clearly added after the approval simply to get those abilities. They make no sense with any demonic powers whatsoever and have no description. You edited the post after I had approved and your friend told you how he got special abilities. I am going to let you roleplay as who you were before, It was enough then and it is enough now. You try to cheat me and this is what you get. Your old profile was wonderful.

There are to be No granted abilities above this post.
Toughguyrm wasnt trying to cheat you, i really did talk to him about this because he told me to read his profile if he read mine. The whole ability thing was accualy my idea from which i recomended him a while ago from when we were talking about this
 

Megan

Sorrows Warrior
well red death wasnt approved. and those abilities make no sense comming from demons. Endermen maybe, demons no. If you would like to redo it to make those powers actually make sense with the lore you're providing, then yes. As it is stated, its simply adding a few sentences that make no sense at all in relation to you, to demons, or anything. It looks like a hacked up half-attempt to just get new skills. When you decide to incorporate those skills with a story that makes sense, we'll see
 

toughguyrm

Loyal Servant of Altera
well red death wasnt approved. and those abilities make no sense comming from demons. Endermen maybe, demons no. If you would like to redo it to make those powers actually make sense with the lore you're providing, then yes. As it is stated, its simply adding a few sentences that make no sense at all in relation to you, to demons, or anything. It looks like a hacked up half-attempt to just get new skills. When you decide to incorporate those skills with a story that makes sense, we'll see
There :D i hope i did not cause any hostility between us over this. I have a tendancy to be a jerk over things and i apologize for that.
Anyways, i did not say any specific powers but the mage in my mind had very advanced powers. However, when Sventar gained these powers he only gained a fraction of them. So he can only do stuff like teleport short distances, be invisible slightly, and jump higher (that is obtained from his life and his training as an assassin)
Thanks for allowing me to rewrite it :)
 
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