Jordan's Application. [Denied - Itzzaboy]

[Jordan23]

1. Your Minecraft username: JordanTheBoss​

2. Your real name: Jordan Lou​

3. Age: 14.​

4. Gender: Male.​

5. Country: Sweden.

6. Have you read the Tome of Citizenship or agree to do so before signing into Hollow World for the first time?: Yes.​

7. How do you feel about the 'roleplay' aspect of our server? Do you have any experience roleplaying?: When I was younger I used to play Runescape a lot but I got tired of it and for the past 3-4 years i've been playing SA-MP (Grand Theft Auto San Andreas - Multi Player). On there i've been on many different kinds of roleplaying servers and roleplaying is something that I really enjoy. But now I got tired of roleplaying real life, the presence. I think that this server seems very exciting and i'd really like to roleplay here with the community in the medival times.

8. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, your interests / hobbies and why you are here in 8 sentences or more. My name is Jordan Lou and I go in 8th grade. On my spare time I practice a lot of basketball and when I am not training sports i'm usually at the computer just playing games and such. I live in a good neighborhood where there aren't a lot of criminal activity but at different parts of the whole city there's shit going on I guess. I like to go to school because you get to be social with different people in your age and you often share the same interests. My friends have a minecraft server so after school we usually play a bit on it. Anyway I like to have big farms on minecraft with sugar canes and seeds, interesting how they grow and such. ​

9. If you have examples of your work please attached them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video: No, sorry.​

10. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?: Just that i'm pretty excited that i've made my app and hopefully i'll be on the server soon.​

11. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?: Yes i'm aware of that.​

12. How did you find out about our server?: Saw it on minecraft server list or something from the official minecraft forums.​

13. Have you voted for us? (Click Here) I've voted now.​

 

[Tdog the 1st]

You seem like a nice guy. You strike me as the mellow type, but your application looks a bit sloppy to me. If I may, I would like to give you some advice. I'm not a moderator, or an administrator, but I do know how to go about white list applications.

Number 7 was solid.
Number 8 was too vague, even though it was long enough. What we want to know by that question is who you are on a semi-personal level. That question is there to see if you are a good fit, but it is also there so we can better understand you, and get along with you better with minimal chance of conflict. Try to tell us more about who you are as a person, we love to see what you are interested in, and you described that very well, but you were vague on your personality.
Number 10 was very sloppy, and the info you put there was not what we are looking for. It is not required for you to input information there, but it helps a great deal. What number 10 is there for is for you to share any bit of information that that was not asked for in number 8.
Lastly, your signature. I am a fan of witty photo shop jokes and gags, but that .gif is a bit inappropriate. We aim for a T for Teen type environment according to the ESRB. Not only is it inappropriate, but it is also immature. Maturity is a big factor on this server, and will determine a lot of your reputation. One of the quickest ways to get kicked, temporarily banned, or permanently banned is immaturity. You wont get kicked just because you say something childish, but if you DO something childish, like push an AFK player into lava or water and kill them, THAT is banishable. That is my advice to you, do what you will with it.

Edit: I also noticed that you swore in number 8. Certain swears are not appropriate on this server, and some can get you into trouble. The F-Bomb is obviously the worst, but the S-Bomb can also get you into trouble. Other, less offensive words can also get you into trouble, or at least get you a stern warning. The first time I said one, I was told, "Watch you language," by not a moderator, not an administrator, but a fellow player. That being said, it just looks bad on you, so don't do it. There are exceptions, like Hell, if used properly, and I've also seen people in global chat say damn and dammit, and not get chastised for it. Just use common sense.

 

[Itzzaboy]

Denied. Its a pg13 server so we will not tolerate language like that.