the story of midge_1

[Midge_1]

1. 
   Profession:
   
   he is a strong gladiator and warrior
   
   Name:
   ognar smith
   
   Nickname:​
2. ognar world weary
   
   
   
   Age:
   28years of age
   
   Gender:
   male
   
   Race:
   born a werewolf
   Height:
   5ft 10
   
   Weight:
   54kg
   
   Hair:
   short dark brown hair thin layer covers body because he is a werewolf
   
   Eyes:
   reflective blue eyes being a werewolf
   Skin:
   european type skin
   
   Identifying Marks:
   a big scar from when he got too close to an angry werewolf
   
   Appearance:
   broad and muscly shoulders with a very big build
   Strengths:
   he is a very good swordsman and a good nightblade
   
   Weaknesses and fears:
   he is especially weakened by silver weapons being a werewolf
   Religion and cults:
   he was in a cult called the nightstalkers who devoted their lives to the god Melpha the god of night
   
   
   
   Backstory:
   before he was born his parents were attaked by werewolves and contracted it . when he was born it was passed on through the generations.
   ​

 

[Eric V]

A. his parents had a race, therefore he has a race
B. Try to make more fears, don't just use the one everybody knows, they could be bad personality traits!
C. Try to be more descriptive of his appearance
D. Describe what a night blade is, what it does, what they stand for
E. Try describing the situation with the angry werewolf more in depth
F. Make your backstory deeper, as this is where people learn the most about your character, how he acts