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Inactive Faelin of Eldor

Jeroxia

We demons of our solemn hour
Good
*evil cackle* I'm not kind enough to post both at once, come on - be realistic!! I have done some of it... But I don't like the wording or the paragraphs... And the sentence variety and structure are frankly appalling... GAHHH, I'M GOING TO CRUCIFY MY ENGLISH TEACHER!!! :mad:
After a year you still have not fixed It?
 

Faelin

The Court Jester
Retired Staff
After a year you still have not fixed It?
If you had read later comments, yoou would have known that all previous stuff had been... disposed of, and all the stuff that I will write now will be new. As such, I have worked out only a vague plot line, with one or two definite events. When, and what comes between them, I have no idea - nor have I am clue whether it's going to be written as if documenting her past, or in narrative (which would be more difficult) - wait and see.
 

Jeroxia

We demons of our solemn hour
Good
If you had read later comments, yoou would have known that all previous stuff had been... disposed of, and all the stuff that I will write now will be new. As such, I have worked out only a vague plot line, with one or two definite events. When, and what comes between them, I have no idea - nor have I am clue whether it's going to be written as if documenting her past, or in narrative (which would be more difficult) - wait and see.
Rox... not patient.. just write and see what happens
 

Faelin

The Court Jester
Retired Staff
^this. When I try to write a story with a certain plan, it fails. But when I simply start writing what I have on my mind, the story is fantastic. 57 pages... Hell, I can release a book and get money XD
DO EEET.

Also, true~
I would dearly love to see where the wind takes me with it, but there are a few crucial elements I need to fit in for it to make sense.
 

Yoda

Lord of Altera
Or it could not make sense and you could weave sense into it in the second draft.

Another term for this is writing a sequel that ties it all together.
 
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