Poetry ( Technical Art )

[apollo6000]

So, I recently took up writing poetry again thanks to a confidence boost from some people so it goes here.

The Hunt:

Deer plays,
hunter stalks,
deer stops,
hunter takes aim,
deer falls,
day is done.

Music:

Drums strike,
trumpets blare,
piano keys jump,
trombones slide,
all peaks,
song ends.

Serenity:

Crickets chirp,
children sleep,
leaves rustle,
all is in peace.

 

[fhamersley]

Keep it up! I love writing and reading poetry, and it's not everyday you can read something beautifully unique like your work!

 

[Evan1114]

*Was never good at poetry, so sticks with stories*

 

[apollo6000]

Thank you

 

[apollo6000]

Suppose I'll start doing 3 a day or something of the sort. Enjoy these ones


The Storm:

Lightning strikes,
thunder breaks,
rain pours,
chaos reins.

A Battle:

Swords clang,
shields bash,
metals shrieks,
blood spills,
the victor is clear,
and the loser no more.

Nothing:

Darkness rules,
all is still,
infinitely cold yet the heat of the sun,
nothing lives,
nothing dies.

 

[apollo6000]

The Forest:

The air is damp and cool.
The light is bent through the leaves.
Blossoms fall from the trees.
Nothing disturbs the peace of such perfection.

Fire:

Passion, light and strength.
Hot, striking, and fast.
Blazing, running, and ever consuming.
Nothing escapes the pure destruction.
But still life comes.
The space is cleared for young.
It is a double edged sword.

Lust:

Ever there and ever secret.
It is all encompassing.
It matters like breath to some.
It is but a game to others.
No one escapes it.
No one wants to take it.
It takes an eternity to leave but a second to be captured.

 

[apollo6000]

Oh yeah! Make fun of Review if ya want! I really would appreciate it.

 

[apollo6000]

I was gonna do poetry on the races but my delete key freaked out and destroyed it all...... There goes a good half hour of work. I'm going to kill this computer *twitch twitch twitch twitch twitch twitch*