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(TrueGameHero15) – application [Declined-Estes]

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TrueGameHero15

Lord of Altera
About You
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TrueGameHero1516 ill b 17 in july 01 I'am From The U.S.A.
You Can Call Me True I've Play RPG's Before Like S.W.T.O.R. And etp. And I Like Minecraft But It's Hard To Find A Good MCRPG I Hope That This Server Is What I'am Looking For. As For When I Get On Minecraft It's When I Get The Time. And My Spelling Is
Not That Good I Have Deislageseah. Reading Deisorder

About Your Character
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Name:True Rage
Age:25
Race:Elve
sketch 2_677073_minecraft_skin-677073.jpg
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The Test
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"True: It's Been 3 Year's Sin's the Battle Betwin The Elves And The Dwarfs Because Of That War I Hate Dwarfs But I Guest They Have The Some Right I've Killed My Sheree Of Them. When I Feel This Ban In My Arm It Remind's Me Of All The Blood Shed--The Needles Blood shed Don't Get Me Rouge I Hate Dwarfs But--The Horror's Of It Steel Give's Me Nightmares I Don't Know If I Well Forget That Day. I've Made A New Live Here In Altera It's Got Good And Bad Values But I Like It Here So Far, There's Still Dwarfs But I Guest I'll Never Be Free Of Them There Everywhere, I've Been Trying To Get A Job Here In Altera It's Hard But You Know Me I'll Make It. ha I Remember When We Use't To Go To The Gratin Behind Your House And Look At The Sunset I Miss You But I Needed A Change A New Start I'll Come And See You And Your Mom Soon I Love You Rose I Hope You Well Change Your Mined And Come Live With Me... Love True Rage..." I Hope She Does't Hate Me For Leaving Her And Her Mom I Sade That I Wood Take Care Of Them But The Way I Was I Wood Of Done More Heme Then Good I Love Her I Wood Of Marred Her If I Had Stayed But I've Made My Design I Own It To Them To Lie In The Bed I've Made..."Rose: I'am Glad To Hear From You True I Sorry I Can't Come Be With You But My mother Needs Me. I Know Things Have Been Hard After Your Mom And Dad Die.. Your Brother Doing Good, He's Seeing Little Ma well Not So Little Anymore. I Hope Your Doing Good And I Know You'll Find A Job Soon I've Been Thinking About The Old Days To, You Remember When Mom Got After Us When You Got That Pie From The Window She Was So Mad I Miss You I Can't With To See You Again... All My Love Rose.." . True: "This Well Be The Last Letter I Well Be Abel To Send To You I Have't To Go Out Of The Area Of Were I Can Send Mail To You When I Have A Job I'll Come And See You I Love And I Miss You I'am Sorry For Failing You I Hope I Make You Happy I'll Well Retinue.. All Of My Love And Hopes True"... This Is The Last Letter Rose Ever wrote To True But He Never Got This Letter" True Mom Die I Need You Please Come Back Please I Don't Know What To Do..............
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I Hope That This Is What Your Looking For, I Did't Know What To Boot Down So I Made Something Up Can't Whate To here Back From You Guys...
 
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Angryboy

Natus de Aurum; Natus ex bellum
Why Are You Talking Like This?

Two things about your application;
1) Fitz's lore is very outdated. Not a huge problem, but I'd recommend reading up on more recent lore when you get the chance.
2) The "Test" section needs to be at least 400 words.

Rewrite the Test section, and I'll give it a read!
 

TrueGameHero15

Lord of Altera
Hey I Did It Like You Tholed Me To And I Got This From
SallyRose
I'm sorry, but your application has failed to meet the criteria listed in the application template and has been declined. Please carefully read and follow all the instructions to pass the application test.

What's Going On?
 

SallyPirate

Lord of Altera
Basically, you need to stop putting a capital letter at the front of every word, and read the application guide carefully.
 
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