aidenninja
Legend
well, this is the comments post for my fanfic so you guys can tell me how bad/well i did, as i said its my first write and i want people to give me some constructive criticism or just comment on it
http://hollowworld.co.uk/threads/star-wars-a-rose-in-the-snow.31425/
http://hollowworld.co.uk/threads/star-wars-a-rose-in-the-snow.31425/