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PushingDaisies' Application [Declined - Brian]

About You!

1. What is your Minecraft username?

PushingDaiziez

2. How old are you?
17 yrs old

3. What country are you from?
USA

4. Have you read the King's law, Tome of Citizenship, Official Lore, and the Survival Guides yet?
Yes

5. In your own words, how would you define metagaming and powergaming?
Mg is when you give your character ooc knowledge or knowledge they do not know about to have the advantage over the person you're dealing with or ruin future roleplay.
Pe is when you force an action upon someone thus not giving the person a chance to react or defend. Ex. *Kai slices off Han's arm* instead it should be *Kai aims for Han's arm*

6. Do we allow X-Raying mods or X-Ray texture packs on the server?
No

7. Name one of our current Mentors.

8. Tell us about yourself!

I love to play video games, watch movies, and read comics. I like to listen to chill dubstep, hip hop, foreign, rap, and old music. I used to play a lot of Life is Feudal, sometimes play Elders Scrolls Online, and now play this, minecraft. I have a tabby cat and she's adorable.

9. Do you have any examples of your work?

10. Did anyone refer you? If not, how did you find our server?

Planetminecraft


About Your Character!

Character Name:

Raven Stillock

Character Age:
21

Character Race:
Human

Appearance:
- Black long hair
- Blue eyes
- Burn scars all over her body (hidden except face, neck and hands)
- Wears a hunter's outfit
- 5 feet and 5 inchestall

(Optional) Picture of the Skin:


Written Test!

When her small village was built a family called the Stillocks were having a child, a baby girl, they named her Raven. The Stillocks lived in a small village, Raven's father was a blacksmith and her mother was a gardener. They made a living by doing trade, selling crops and metalwork. Over the years of Raven growing up, she was told stories of the great kings who once ruled Aethius and their great sacrifices and wars to protect mankind. Raven was fascinated by the stories her mother and father told her, she even thought of becoming a knight herself one day to also protect mankind and bring justice to the world. When Raven turned six, her parents told her great news about having another baby. Raven was excited to have a another brother or sister. After 9 months, Raven's mother gave birth to twins, a boy and a girl. Raven and her parents were happy to have new members in the family. After the twins were born, Raven's father saved up enough money to move to a more secluded place.

After living in their new home for a few years, the twins who are now ten years old and Raven who is now 16 years old had a good childhood until... EVERYTHING CHANGED! All with the simple actions done by some bandits. They knew about the family and how well off they were so decided that it wouldn't hurt to ambush them when they least expected it. Not everything went as planned however. And that is because of the burning spirit that Raven possessed. Raven knew that what she was hearing outside the door of her room was no work of her imagination. So she did what any knight in training would. She grabbed her old trusty sword and cautiously approached the sounds after alarming her family. Little did she know though that if the bandits were to run into any type of trouble while trying to rob the family of everything they owned that they were to set absolutely everything on fire. And that is just what they did at the sight of a sword wielding girl and an angry family. The fire quickly swallowed the whole house in flames. While the events of everything were still processing through their still tired minds they didn't notice the fire coming between them. Therefore separating Raven from her family and unfortunately preventing them from ever leaving the burning house. Because there was only one way out and Raven just so happened to be the only one able to escape through the flames. She slowly turned her head back towards her family whose faces only showed understanding and with a simple nod of the head she made her way to the only way out. As she was running through the flames to the door she was harshly lashed with the flames. Causing her to have severe burns all over her body. And so Raven looked on helplessly at the burning house. She did not only see the life she once had falling to ruins before her but she heard the screams of her family as they burned to death. That is when Raven decided that she would do everything in her power to avenge the family she once had. After five years of wandering and surviving while having the death of her family still heavy on her mind she finally started a new page in her life.





 

BrianAT16

The Brainz
Legend
Retired Staff
LeStrangest
LeStrangest
Legend
Hello PushingDaisies,

There are a few things that need to be cleared up before I can go through with your application. Firstly you forgot to answer question #7. Have a look through our guides to find the thread about mentors.

Secondly your test is nicely written but that type of story has been used many many times before and is a bit cliche in our setting. We tend to ask players avoid violence in their backstory and test as that isn't the focus of our server. And we already have too many people wanting revenge on bandits as it is. As well as being the sole survivor of a fire. It's been done many times. So if you could go through and fix up the app, perhaps go a more neutral and passive route it would aid in getting you accepted. Also while I know you have not stated your character was great in combat but we do need to remind you that all training to become a knight or just combat training needs to be gone IG though RP. There will be plenty of time to toughen up your character on the server.

Once you have made the above edit's just reply below and I'll give your app another look. Thanks. :)
 

BrianAT16

The Brainz
Legend
Retired Staff
LeStrangest
LeStrangest
Legend
"I'm sorry, but your application has failed to meet the criteria listed in the application template and has been declined. Please carefully read and follow all the instructions to pass the application test."

Declined due to inactivity. Feel free to reapply with the above edits once you have time again.
 
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