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Zavúri

Zavúri

Villager
Name: Zavúri Eliás.

Nickname/Alias: 'Zavúri'.

Age: Roughly 25, His age wouldn't be distinguishable as such.

Gender: Male.

Race: Human.

Height: 6' 5'' Tall.

Weight: 12 Stone.

Hair: Blonde, Overgrown hair, Cut just above the shoulders.

Eyes: White eyes, with dulled down blue irises.

Skin: Pale in comparison to most.

Identifying Marks: -None as of yet-

Appearance: He would appear to be of average weight for his size, and his skin tone would not differ from his brethren. He would have no aura as of yet, but depending on the path he takes, this would be affected otherwise. His hair would be rather unkept, but would remain above his shoulders and out of his eyes, meeting down his cheeks with a trimmed beard. He would appear to be more muscular than his own kind, and would stand upright, with an average posture.

Strengths: He would hold some ability in wielding a Sword, accompanied by his strength and intelligence. His broad build would make up his greatest personal strength, being able to maneuver his body weight around to help him overcome his foes, but at a slight cost.

Weaknesses and fears: He would not fear much, apart from potential loss of honour and pride, But would hold a few weaknesses. For one, His strength and ability comes costly against his fatigue, and he becomes easily tired when in conflict or on the move. His appearance may also hinder him when he would need to talk politics with others, appearing thicker than he actually is. Most of all, His size would not allow him to move as easily in smaller areas, restricting movement when like this.

Religion and cults: He would not hold specific devotion to any particular god, But he would individually and passively respect the majority. This does not affect his morals, as would rather believe in holding honor and pride.

Profession: Before his adulthood, He was a simple farm hand, spending the majority of his time working machinery, grinding wheat and the sort for bread. Within his spare time, he would be found training vigorously, striving to become stronger, to help himself work harder and better, but to also aid in providence of the locals. After this, he left the farm, and went in search for another settlement to aid, before once again, moving on, in hopes of creating an order of his own.
 

Faelin

The Court Jester
Retired Staff
Very nice! Only one small criticism, it is better to build a reputation for skills such as swordsmanship in-game through roleplaying and PvP. Sure, be a good swordsman, and of course it can be a strength, but the word "tremendous" is rather extreme, and has not yet been earned. ;)

I'm not trying to be imperious, just making a suggestion which will hopefully lead to some interesting roleplay. :)
 

Faelin

The Court Jester
Retired Staff
Nice! Now you can build up your skills in game, perhaps through training with your house, at the university or else in a guild of sorts.
(by the way, my in game name is cherrysparx777 - we met in game a couple of days ago :) )
 
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