dragoioi1's Whitelist Application - [Declined - Sally]

[dragoioi1]

1. What is your minecraft username?​

dragoioi1​

2. How old are you?​

13​

3. What gender are you?​

Male​

4. What country do you live in?
United States

5a. Do you agree to read our Survival Guide before logging onto the server? ​

Yes​

5b. Do you agree to consult both our Tome of Citizenship and Everything you need to know page before asking any questions in the game?​

Yes​

6. Please provide a lengthy in-character introduction.​

Hello my name is Dragoioi1, I am a Adventurer in the lands of Minecraftia. In my journeys I conquered many things like: finding a stronghold, battling the Enderdragon, and going into the nether and battled the monsters there. But in my adventures I have never made such a journey to the vast lands of Altera. So I packed my inventory and now currently headed to explore the lands of Altera, hoping to find the city Stormhold...

7. Please introduce yourself to the community; explaining who you are, what your interests and/or hobbies are and why you would like to be a part of our community in around 8 sentences or more. You do not have to disclose any personal information if you don't want to, but we'd just like to know what kind of person you are.​

I am a caring and funny young man. I am interested in trying out new things, for example I used to be afraid of heights, I still am a little, but I climbed higher than I am a comfortable with. I wouldn't say I'm a "nerd" or "geek," but I do love Medival Fantasy things.My hobbies are: Arts and Crafts, Building primitive-medival weapons and tools, and gardening. I started Minecraft in January 2011, went on my first server in Februaru 2011. I was really interested in server and what you can do with people who play around the globe. For the past few months I've been wanting a server that brought in Medival Fantasy. I was looking around on MCServerlist one day and I found HollowWorld, I decided that I want to join it and want to make it my first time going on a white-listed server. I am looking forward into going on the Hollowworld server if I get added.​

8. Do you have any examples of your work and creativity, either in minecraft or outside? You can attach them to this post using the "upload a file" button or link to the image or video.​

Look for the 4 photos. It is the outside and inside of my house in creative mode.

9. Is there anything else you wish to share with us?​

Not at the moment.

10. Are you aware that the use of black magic (xray,xray texture packs and ore locator mods) is not allowed on our server, and a banishable offense?​

Yes I am very aware, I only like to play Vanilla Minecraft, I'm not into Mods,Cheats,Etc.

11. How did you find out about our server?​

I was looking on MCServerlist, and i thought this might be just the server I've been looking for a long time.
12. Have you voted for us?
No, not yet, sorry.

 

[Tomahawk777]

1) You shall write a RP-character introduction at point 6. So you should develop a character that suits this server. Something like: "Hello I'm Ulrych Lonmar, assistant of Stormhold and Farmer. Since my early childhood I was teached how to farm and breed. When I came to Altera and joined the old norse town Stormhold I asked the mayor Draco to serve the town with my knowledge..."
2) Please read point 7 again and do what is written there (concentrate on the number given in the text)

Good luck with your application
Tomahawk777 (Ulrych Lonmar)

 

[dragoioi1]

Thanks Tomahawk777, I appreciate the help. I changed what you said and I think it might be better now. Now I just have to wait for someone to approve or decline it.

 

[TAdaaa_NL]

I'm not approved yet, but i saw other applications and If i was you i should make point 6 longer.
Just saying

 

[dragoioi1]

Thanks for commenting, I think point 6 might be all I think of to write as an introduction.

 

[TAdaaa_NL]

No problem
But howlong will it take till they will approve the application? If you know.

 

[dragoioi1]

I don't know when they will, i think they'll do it when they can.

 

[TAdaaa_NL]

I hope I see you in the Altera than

 

[dragoioi1]

You to man.

 

[TAdaaa_NL]

Thanks bro,

 

[Valonyx]

Dont worry, it shouldn't be long, im waiting too, i expect maybe tomorrow.

 

[Mikipowah]

I get the feeling from your application that you are impatient and rush into things, since you haven't taken the time to simply sit down and write a well thought-out or succinct application. I'm sorry but I would decline this application. However, another moderator may allow you through.​

 

[dragoioi1]

I wasn't trying to seem impatient, I've really just been replying to people you have posted here. But typing this application took me at least 20-30 minutes. I have read some forum topics and one says don't ask people to reply, and I haven't been asking. People have been replying with out me asking, and sometimes their just typing something to help me improve this application. But thank you for opinion Mikipowah.

 

[SallyPirate]

I'm going to hop in and decline this. The answer to 6 isn't a proper RP introduction, sorry.