Lambmaster
Legend of Altera
Hello Everyone!
*Urgent* I will be Updating this ALL the time, please ensure to check weekly (at the least)
*Whilst reading the endless ToC I will be trying to root out errors, I am doing so only to maximize the accuracy and try to help out as much as possible,*
*No Monetary Rewards as it Ruins my RP character *
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Page 14, paragraph 4, it quotes "look a the existing towns..." this is near the end of the Paragraph.
I feel that this should be "at" sorry if I am incorrect
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Page 28, Bottom of the page "a *Reserve* slot does not guarantee access on every occasion..."
I feel that this should be "a *Reserved* slot does not guarantee access on every occasion..." Sorry if I am Incorrect
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(Credit to Minecraft_king_)
Page 10, Paragraph 5, "we have disabled to ability to build in wilderness"
I feel that this should be "We have disabled the ability to build in the wilderness..."
Sorry if I am Incorrect
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Page 10, Paragraph 2, There seems to be some sort of Error, it quotes "the middle ages are a rather long period from 500 to 1500."
I think that it should either be "...roughly from 500-1400's" this is, if you were reffering to specific time periods, more accurate.
if you were referring Century wise, it would be "...roughly from *the* 5th-15th *Century*" This is again, more accurate.
Sorry if I am Incorrect
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Page 12, Paragraph 2, Number 1, It Quotes "Though we are a mature server..."
I feel that this should be " All though we are a mature server..."
Sorry if I am incorrect
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Thanks
Lambmaster
*Urgent* I will be Updating this ALL the time, please ensure to check weekly (at the least)
*Whilst reading the endless ToC I will be trying to root out errors, I am doing so only to maximize the accuracy and try to help out as much as possible,*
*No Monetary Rewards as it Ruins my RP character *
1._______________________________________________________________
Page 14, paragraph 4, it quotes "look a the existing towns..." this is near the end of the Paragraph.
I feel that this should be "at" sorry if I am incorrect
_______________________________________________________________
2._____________________________________________________
Page 28, Bottom of the page "a *Reserve* slot does not guarantee access on every occasion..."
I feel that this should be "a *Reserved* slot does not guarantee access on every occasion..." Sorry if I am Incorrect
_____________________________________________________________
3.____________________________________________________________
(Credit to Minecraft_king_)
Page 10, Paragraph 5, "we have disabled to ability to build in wilderness"
I feel that this should be "We have disabled the ability to build in the wilderness..."
Sorry if I am Incorrect
________________________________________________________________
4.________________________________________________________
Page 10, Paragraph 2, There seems to be some sort of Error, it quotes "the middle ages are a rather long period from 500 to 1500."
I think that it should either be "...roughly from 500-1400's" this is, if you were reffering to specific time periods, more accurate.
if you were referring Century wise, it would be "...roughly from *the* 5th-15th *Century*" This is again, more accurate.
Sorry if I am Incorrect
__________________________________________________________________________
5.___________________________________________________________
Page 12, Paragraph 2, Number 1, It Quotes "Though we are a mature server..."
I feel that this should be " All though we are a mature server..."
Sorry if I am incorrect
_____________________________________________________________
Thanks
Lambmaster