The Hard Times. (My own writing)

[GhostKairo]

Something I've noticed since chapter 1....
YOU KEEP CHANGING THE CHARACTER'S NAMES! (/ban GhostKairo123 Reason: caps xD)

Who's Emily? Who's Jack? Who's Seth?

You gotta fix that.

 

[kaza125]

Something I've noticed since chapter 1....
YOU KEEP CHANGING THE CHARACTER'S NAMES! (/ban GhostKairo123 Reason: caps xD)

Who's Emily? Who's Jack? Who's Seth?

You gotta fix that.

Thanks for spoting that Kairo, you see Ihave a list of characters on another document so thoses names you just said will come into play later, the Emily charcter will be very interesting...

 

[GhostKairo]

Nice.

 

[kaza125]

Update: Chapter six done.

 

[kaza125]

Chapter Seven done, also will be doing a sequel.

 

[kaza125]

Just as a notice people, Frankieba5 wants me to do this as a play so if you want to be an actor in it, I guess pm me or frankieba5.

 

[Bartooliinii]

Wow that is a lot to read! I will read it when I got more time and when I have drawn the 4 others. So that will take some weeks :/ good to see you are really writing a big story though!

 

[Megadonkey30]

-This is great :3

 

[kaza125]

-This is great :3

I wake up and see 12 alerts from you.

 

[Megadonkey30]

*Laughs evilly*

 

[kaza125]

Hey guys, I'm thinking reboting the tale, a big old revamp, because I think I have improved in my writing and I can reckon i can improve this alot, so a good idea?

 

[kaza125]

I'll start tmoz since there is some support for it