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Hey Si10k, I'm not sure if you're finished editing (you still have that note on your rank-up), but we've taken a look at your application, and have some feedback. I think you still have a ticket open, so I'll post it in there.
-=- In a void of dreams, Irradiant Reflection feels a chasm opening in their mind, radiant as the moon. Echoes of past deeds reverberate relentlessly not unlike waves crashing on a rocky shore. Amidst an ocean of thoughts, a solitary figure, cloaked in mystery, emerges. Like a tempestuous wave, the figure commands attention, yet its stillness exudes an undeniable force. A whisper rises, indistinct and muffled, though he knows that they are acclaiming their mystery as a source of boundless power. Awakening, they are imbued with profound insight and vigor.
Congratulations, Shadow of Visage, for achieving T3. -=-
-=- In one of her trainings, Estella began to work her blade upon a straw-man target. The teachings of Leofwine reminding her of specific tactics. As she went to strike upon a final blow, an arcing red lighting strike seemed to emanate from the blade - rushing up her arm. A new sense of renewed understanding, and a welcome to the God of Valor. -=-
We are still reviewing the remaining two. Standby!
Teach another character something about something relevant to your character’s faith
Have a conversation about your character’s faith Taught her brother Elis about Visage and why she is a follower. And how Silas sent a horrible message.
Prominent Deeds:
Host a sermon in worship of your character's god (repeatable up to 4x, count as two prominent deeds) (x2 points)
Sermon given in Gallia using the characters voice of "the lion".
Personally accomplish a significant achievement that God would be impressed by (repeatable) (x1 point) Sacrificed a goat to Visage in asking for safe travel when she uses boats. Her logic is since Visage owns the seas, she should give tribute so she will have the knowledge of sea travel. Elis a follower of Jax also was present for the goat sacrifice.
Establish a prominent shrine dedicated to your character's patron (once) (x1 Point)
-2376 / -8163
Describe a meaningful ritual or practice that your character demonstrates their faith by (once) (x1 point)
Her brother Elis saw her at the ritual site in the Red Forest praying and offering thanks to Visage. Lily , being in charge of that particular region constantly is in prayer to Visage, speaking in Elven to him of secrets she learned, confiding only to him. And thanking him for the knowledge.
+ Create or find a shrine that your character prays at regularly
- The Landing
+ 2 prominent deeds from the list above
- Yes, Joining Rogals cult with Pohk'urz guiding him away from Shallhera to be with her and taking Velmont and Rogal as a mentor.
- Mele joined Rogal in 'purifying' a demon artifact changing it to Jishrim meeting one of Jishrims angels. Experincing her own pain in the back due to Pohk'urz becoming cursed.
+ Must decently adhere to the values of their prospective patron.
» 'Do as I say' She'd listen to the angel of suffering and what to do exactly begining to her own journey to Jishrim by 'Listen to me' not saying a word to the angel learning how to read and learning common so she can fully understand Rogal and Velmonts teaching.
+ Create or find a shrine that your character prays at regularly
- The Landing
+ 2 prominent deeds from the list above
- Yes, Joining Rogals cult with Pohk'urz guiding him away from Shallhera to be with her and taking Velmont and Rogal as a mentor. View attachment 140981
- Mele joined Rogal in 'purifying' a demon artifact changing it to Jishrim meeting one of Jishrims angels. Experincing her own pain in the back due to Pohk'urz becoming cursed. View attachment 140982
+ Must decently adhere to the values of their prospective patron.
» 'Do as I say' She'd listen to the angel of suffering and what to do exactly begining to her own journey to Jishrim by 'Listen to me' not saying a word to the angel learning how to read and learning common so she can fully understand Rogal and Velmonts teaching.
[!] Mele finds that on her way to the Grove, a sharp pain echoes in her mind. The sounds of chittering, crawling - ever present. They lurk around her, behind her. The scuttle of what feels like insects crawling entirely over her body consume her, until she finds herself falling into a sleep right in the middle of the woods. When she awakes, she finds the same chittering for a brief time.. but a comfort with it too. And a new power. Welcome to T1.
Show extended worship, with two months OOC since achieving T2. Approved on November 13th 2022 [x]
1 - Attend an event directly related to your character’s faith
Andrew attended a jousting tournament held in the Landing festival grounds under the herald "Making you wish you should've messed with someone your own size, it's the everso valiant Andrew D'Amryun!". He may have not won, but he put up a fair fight. [“Fester not thy body to disrepair.”]X
1 - Attend an event directly related to your character’s faith
Andrew along with several other people fought to reclaim a trading post taken over by presumed scavenging Kaltics. As they snuck into the castle Andrew and his companions attacked a couple kaltic guards, however it was only afterwards it was revealed the Kaltic people had valid reason to take over the trading post to which Andrew still remains regretful to this day. [“Do not betray thy companions, people, or traditions.”]X
1 - Attend an event directly related to your character’s faith
After being caught in a scouting mission to Warped Eden, the party had to both defend themselves against demons, while resisting mind tempering. In combat against a Viand aiding Kharn, he stabbed its knee, but got himself stabbed in the shoulder, rendering his dominant swinging arm hardly able to use. Though Andrew still assisted, casting the spell Call Of The Banner to try and strengthen Marian in resisting illusions. Later casting Bolster in an attempt for all to retreat safely. [“Tremble not upon the field of battle, but always remember the better part of valor.”]X
1 - Personally accomplish a significant achievement that God would be impressed by
He was promoted for the position of Lieutenant, then Guard Captain in Storm’s Landing, having served for two years since taking his oath. [“Defend those that cannot defend themselves.”] X
1 - Personally accomplish a significant achievement that God would be impressed by
He fought the abyssal Reinhard Strussen Blud with Laicelem in the Landing to keep his guard’s oath of protecting Storm’s Landing. Andrew’s leg was broken in the fight, but he managed to immobilize his opponent enough to yield. [“Hold true to thy given word.”]
Andrew’s Report:
Officer Name: Andrew D’Amryun
Suspect Name: Reinhard Strussen Blud
Accused Crimes: Attempted Murder, Physical Assault, Fleeing Arrest, Consensual Possession
Reportedly Adda used magic to get the biting bugs off of Reinhard. The bugs caused a lot of noise, agitating the armored Reinhard further and causing him to attack at Adda. He took his mace and tried to kill him. Laicelem said he tried to intervene which is when Reinhard summoned a demon soldier to keep him at bay. Only when Laicelem yelled at Reinhard to stop did he back down. I arrived at the scene as Reinhard shouted insults at Adda and the demon soldier disappeared. Reinhard would leisurely leave against my demands of an arrest. I attempted putting cuffs on him, but he fled, breaking through the back window. The chase was brief, ending with three of us dueling in an alley. He eventually yielded when there was no other escape than death. With the help of Laicelem and Reinhard was brought to the Guardhouse.
1 - Attend an event directly related to your character’s faith
In Astrakhan during an event to search for soldiers who would join the legion of Astrakhan, Andrew would win the games of javelin throwing and the horseback archery, though he yielded in the wrestle game against Tiek who he has broken the nose of in combat. Andrew made a blood oath in the name of Valiant and joined the legion. [“Defend those that cannot defend themselves.”]X
1 - Describe a meaningful ritual or practice that your character demonstrates their faith by
He is committed to his faith. As a morning ritual, before going on guard duty he prays at his humble shrine that for the remainder of the day he’ll do anything to protect the people around him. [“Do not betray thy companions, people, or traditions.”]
2 - Host a sermon in worship of your character's god
He held a sermon by a bonfire in the festival grounds. He preached the strength that Valiant embodies to him, to fight the odds, remain hopeful and never lose sight of those that may need your strength. [“Do not betray thy companions, people, or traditions.”]X
1 - Attend an event directly related to your character’s faith
Andrew along with a small party went to investigate the theft of a necklace in the Landing. While the thief remains a mystery, they found a Halfling child by docks who was bit by a Crooner. Once the child was healed they uncovered a hidden Crooner nest in the sewers which they would clear out so no other person would ever be attacked. After which Andrew would find the necklace in the Crooner nest, however unbeknownst to him it was occupied by a demon. [“Defend those that cannot defend themselves.”]X
1 - Make a significant personal sacrifice to keep true to your character’s patron’s values
Andrew would exorcize himself, after the demon within him had robbed him of numerous nights and started to break apart his mind. Knowing this can’t continue he asked Eliss Olliran to perform an exorcism on him, sacrificing “The Dragon Slasher” in the ritual. A wooden sword made from his childhood bed frame. The sword next to his current masterwork blades still remains his most prized. Andrew doesn’t recognize the worth of an object by its monetary value or the power it possesses. It’s simply the significance it holds, being the first sword he ever created when he was six and still in Linistel sparring with his childhood friends. [“Fester not thy body to disrepair.”]X
· · ─ ─ ────≺ Notable Deeds ≻──── ─ ─ · ·
Andrew has talked with Estella, a soon to be blessed of Valiant about who wishes to be in the future, what she wishes to do when she’s blessed and how not every fight should be approached with blunt force. Afterwards they spared briefly, Andrew taking a very offensive approach and Estella struggling with her footing.
Andrew took personal interest in the case of a dead councilmember and a missing citizen. He had interrogated the guard at the scene, who had not told him the whole story out of a fear he’d get fired or worse, killed for being a Vyre. Andrew promised by the tenet of Valiant [“Hold true to thy given word.”] that he will keep his vyrcism a secret if he tells him what he knows.
Andrew is not cursed by Valiant.
its two years later and i can get t3 now. imma go sleep. gn
[!]
As Andrew strolls through Astrakhan's evening dusk, a lurking figure emerges from the shadows. With a swift turn, he confronts the mysterious presence—a bandit, but unlike any he's encountered before. There's an otherworldly aura about him, a hint of something beyond the ordinary. Swords immediately clash in a dazzling display of red and blue sparks, a tempest of power swirling around them. Each move is a dance of danger, a test of skill and bravery. With valor and skill, Andrew prevails, delivering the final blow. The bandit, now smiling, utters, 'Welcome to T3, Brave One. Your valor is unmatched.' And with those words, the bandit dissolves into the evening mist, leaving Andrew with a sense of triumph and a renewed spirit.
2 months since Tier 2 Ya (don't remember the exact date, but its been more than 2 months I'm pretty sure.)
10 Total Prominent Deeds
9/3/2023: Went to hell (for a final time hopefully) to escort Melarue and Xander for Aleksei. Claming a demon's head to return to Aleksei
9/8/2023: Faught Branko in the Storm's Landing Cathedral... Fighting valiantly until his end... He was ressurected as a zombie shortly after.
8/19/2023: Was knighted by Aleksei von Ivanov, professing that he would never break the Valiant tenets. After of which he faught in the melee taking out two opponents before (though putting up a good fight) being finished off by Vowrawn.
9/30/2023: Went with Hiedric and Xiqu to a cave, After Hiedric fell into frozen water he dived into it to get him out of it. (Hiedric's Sparking event)
10/18/2023: went to linlea and tried to focus on diplomacy in getting vowrawn released by meeting with ashna, though ultimately failed.
10/27/2023: During a very heated moment, Leofwine used his artifact to stop what he saw as a possible conflict.
11/15/2023: Challenged to a duel by Glory, won and then tended to their wounds. Leofwine then talked to them about honor.
11/25/2023: Leofwine went to Nid Arach, with Aleksei and some others. Moving through a beastmasters trial building, managing to get through it and even calm his nerves enough to face a giant spider. Next they moved to a library where Leofwine assisted in burning it down
12/11/2023: Leofwine faught with branko, finding him along the roads near windkeep. Not fighting him at first, Branko invited leofwine to strangle him to death. Leofwine declined, Branko threatened innocent people if he didn't. Leofwine denied instead deciding that Branko did not deserve to choose his death, before fighting... Where Leofwine went down like a bag a of bricks and Branko claimed his sword once more.
1/7/2024: Leofwine and a group went to a swamp to figure out what was attacking livestock and took someones son. After killing two Fluichs, they went and found a child who was deathly wounded. Faith healed one of their wounds but made another one slightly worse. Leofwine stepped up and offered to take the childs second worse wound (A lethal) which he did taking the wound upon him self leaving him unconscious. Though he managed to survive the ride to a eark settlement. Once he was returned to consciousness they returned the child to their father.
Must have completed the ‘meaningful ritual or practice’ deed for any tier On a Daily basis he trains for atleast 2 hours in his burden set (Hellmetal Custom Plate + full hellmetal greatsword), to prepare for when he must use it. His burden armor being named so as it means he has failed in trying to use Diplomacy to end a conflict , thus his burden of failure.
Must consistently adhere to the tenets and values of their patron He does, he despises bloodlust, often preferring to talk things out rather than fight. As well as protecting those who cannot protect themselves.
Must not be actively cursed by their patron Hes not
Thank you for this application! It is looking really good, however a few of the later acts we are having a question on - specifically the stopping of a conflict with an artifact, and the one in reference to diving into water. At this time, we'd either like further clarification in a ticket or one more act to replace this one.
Thank you! Please reach out to Divine with any questions.
Teach another character something about something relevant to your character’s faith
Have a conversation about your character’s faith Taught her brother Elis about Visage and why she is a follower. And how Silas sent a horrible message.
Prominent Deeds:
Host a sermon in worship of your character's god (repeatable up to 4x, count as two prominent deeds) (x2 points)
Sermon given in Gallia using the characters voice of "the lion".
Personally accomplish a significant achievement that God would be impressed by (repeatable) (x1 point) Sacrificed a goat to Visage in asking for safe travel when she uses boats. Her logic is since Visage owns the seas, she should give tribute so she will have the knowledge of sea travel. Elis a follower of Jax also was present for the goat sacrifice.
Establish a prominent shrine dedicated to your character's patron (once) (x1 Point)
-2376 / -8163
Describe a meaningful ritual or practice that your character demonstrates their faith by (once) (x1 point)
Her brother Elis saw her at the ritual site in the Red Forest praying and offering thanks to Visage. Lily , being in charge of that particular region constantly is in prayer to Visage, speaking in Elven to him of secrets she learned, confiding only to him. And thanking him for the knowledge.
Hi there! The application is looking good but unfortunately the team does not feel that sacrificing a goat aligns with Visage, and therefore we will be asking for one more act to replace it with. Thank you!
Hi there! The application is looking good but unfortunately the team does not feel that sacrificing a goat aligns with Visage, and therefore we will be asking for one more act to replace it with. Thank you!
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