Abbey Mirabelle Oceana - The Mermaid Queen's Tail

[The Living Ghost]

I love the scenery, for is exactly what I imagined. you put a lot of detail into the docks and I love it, but you are right about your characters being 'okay'' so keep practicing them I expect another drawing from you for maybe some past parts

Gotta...keep... Practicing....on....faces. Problem is I love doing the background and scenery, which is why you can only see the tail of a mermaid in the blood tide picture

 

[Bluebird157]

D: write more of yo storrryyy!

 

[The Living Ghost]

Oh yeah, what happened to the three parts?

 

[abbeyvie]

The power went out along with my files that I was writing. I kinda rage quit..

 

[The Living Ghost]

Ouuuuuch, I know what that feels like

 

[abbeyvie]

MOAR NAO???!! - Wait I can't ask myself that...

 

[abbeyvie]

Bettyboo, you're just as bad as shadowsmalls! Say something goodfishnibbets!!

 

[bettemus99]

I luv your stories, I want moar NOW!!!!

Edit: Something.

 

[abbeyvie]

But I wanted you to say 'something'...

 

[bettemus99]

Dere?

 

[abbeyvie]

Yes!!

 

[The Living Ghost]

Itzza is bad on my threads.. He flipping likes everything T__T

Itzza strikes again!

 

[abbeyvie]

You know, only liking a thread doesn't auto-watch it for you.. So shadowsmalls might not even know about us chatting about him..

 

[The Living Ghost]

I really didn't know what to write at the moment... so this might be edited when I feel like fixing it..
It's really just a filler.. I didn't write much because I kept getting distracted.. I also need some help..
ANSWER MY QUESTIONS

1. What was your favorite part? 1 reason?

2. Tell me what to write about! And yes this is a question!!

EDIT: Me won't fix it until I get helps..

1. Stupid answer: the part with me in it
Serious answer: When abbey finds the island, don't know why
2. Stupid answer: Dragons
Serious answer: Continue with your train of thought with sarus and don't let it pull into writers block town! I've been stuck there for weeks

 

[Spark]

1. The part about all of it :3 1 reason: Its all so epic!!!!

2. You could write about your lovely trip to Uliima! ^-^

 

[abbeyvie]

Well to suggestion, I'm going to extend entails on sarus

 

[Tunika04]

Bewpy loves :3

 

[abbeyvie]

Bewpy loves :3

?????????????????
Bewps is already a lover.

 

[The Living Ghost]

Well to suggestion, I'm going to extend entails on sarus

Aww yeeeaaaah

 

[wakerman4]

Abbey Tail, aye, I know of her.
'Tis one of the most smartest and best music players, the Mermaids be.
I went around to many people. Dwarfs, Humans, A naked man named Robin...

...but they all say strange things of ta Mermaids.​

So...I committed Suicide and visited Abby Tail.​

And ya know?​

I know I have a dagger tipped above me head...but it was 'ta best thing I have ever done in my travels, ever since I killed the man who killed me family.​

And that....was a long time ago, aye.​

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Say what ye like of Abby Tail, and 'ta Mermaids...​

...but remember 'tis.​

The worst creatures who walk and swim are the legged folk'.​

Aye...Mermaids be sometimes nasty, but all the same, friendly is yer were there friend.​

(Read Gromm Wake, on the Fourms)​

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( Abby, why not do a story about da daft legged man who entered your home and offered himself? Ye know who I mean )​