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Curonious`s [Approved - Somnastra]

Curonious

Legend of Altera
About you
1) What is your MINECRAFT username?


Ziggy1swag

2) How old are you?

I am 17

3) Where are you?

Canada
4) Have you read our guides yet?

Yes i have read Them all and May I say very well done indeed. Professional detailed But yet very welcoming and warm!
5) Introduce yourself!

Well my name is Adnan. I live in Canada but am originally from Somalia.
I am currently in grade 12 and working In a call office for Shaw. my job is relaxed, laid back
and flexible with my hours. :p I love talking to new people and getting to know them.
I am a poet and Love writing poetry its soothes me she I'm agitated and calms me when I'm angry.
I love Rp games like nothing before I've been looking for a good one for 1 1/2 years can u believe.
Im obsessed with games like Skyrim and GTA games with open concept basics.
I feel like with games that you have to follow a certain path just limits my abilities and attacks my curiosity. It makes me feel like I'm trapped and i just don't like being trapped. :)


6) Got any examples of your work?

I love building i have a passion for it i may not be the "best" But I'm certainly good ;p

7) Did you explore our world prior to your application?
I Did and It was well built Loved the beginning btw it was horrifying but at the same time it was cool
i did not however go into detail and go to each town though because i was anxious to Wright my application. ;)


8) Referrer:

The Website ;P

About your character
Name
:

My characters name is Zermanion Curonious

But in his former band of brothers he was called Mistogan

Age:

I am 23 years Old

Race:

I come from the forest elvs

Appearance:

I am Darker than most elves.
Around 6.4-6-6 In hight
Not Supper buff but Toned
I have black Hair With 3 white Streaks on either sides and through the middle
My hair is pulled back in A ponytail That is Tied On Each 3 White Streaks
A mustach that connects to the beard And hair
The beard comes down under my chin with a curl and is around the size of a fist
I have a scar on the right side of my lip
Hazle Eyes With a Loving yet curious and unknown look in my eyes
I stand Strait All the time with my head not healed high yet not low but in the middle

The test

The cold wind blowing my hair as if it was a flag. While i Stalk my pray wondering about under me.
The dear walking Unknowing its fate While I wait for the best Shot my bow Drawn….Aim….Relea - The dears Head Jerks Up To the south-East and darts the opposite way. Confused I look towards the
Cause of my Pray`s Escape Slowly and quietly working my way through the branches "Shhhh! The trees are always listening" A woman Says looking slightly to the left I see a woman in her late twenties leading a pack of young children. " phew Its only children " Thinking to my self as I make my way down to the horde of kids. "Stop! Who Are You! Whats Your Name! What Do you Want!" Howled the woman when i appeared from behind a Decaying Dead Tree. "My name is Zermanion I am a forest elf from a tribe close to here. These are dangerous forests your in Madam What brings you here?" I replied "………..Will you harm us?" she asked "No i have no such intentions" I stated "Thank Goodness My name is Aliesde and these are my kids.We are here because These Kids I have with me were being used as Slaves And I was there Supervisor. I was supposed to watch them as they worked and wiped them when they stopped But i just couldn't do it So i freed as many as i could and ran with them. We have made it this far and Are now looking for a docks so we can make are way to Altera. I have a brother there who can help me and the children." She Informed me " The docks are to the north East ill escort you there safely. Only Because theres no animals in a 4 mile radius due to your... seaming.., Follow me"
We walked through the forest to a path made from gravel, we followed on the Foot path. "The ocean is near. Its behind this hill" I said sniffing the air. The Sweet smell of the ocean sent clothed us immediately As we came to the top of the hill. Aliesde And the children were behind me about a meter, as we approach I could see a group of men waiting At the docks Flustered and fidgety. "Stop..lay on the floor" I snapped Aliesde and the children To with a sharp immediate voice. They all obeyed "There is a group of men wearing dark green cloaks at the shore Is that them?" I asked "Yes ohh god Please help us" Aliesde prayed "listen Hide behind these Bushes Ill Lure them out, take this Money and Leave When i am Out of sight Got it?" I Ordered " How about you? What will happen to you?" She Questioned "I can handle my self just get out of here Ill meet you At the dock of Althar Tell the in keeper of Glory Inn Mistogan Sent you And you need Shelter and food. Wait there for me" I Instructed "Wait What...Why" Ill Explain When I see you next Bye For Now" I Said Parting with them
I drawed my Boat Pulled Back and released it making sure it would hit the floor behind. the men. I shaped my bow on to my back and Bolted In the forest In one swift Motion. The men Began Running like complete savages Towards me. As i faded into the forest darkness I leaped Up in to the trees now hidden form the Grounders. The men Passed me and continued into the forest Unknowingly Running like animals i could
only think of one thing My Prey. Making my way home I found a boar walking with slow strides. I unclipped my bow aimed and shot the Boar In the Neck to sustain minimal damage to The source And carried it home. My Mom was waiting at the porch And my Good for nothing older brother Sitting on the tree branches Greeted me. I dropped the boar Infront of my brother and he got to work skinning it right a way. I walked over to my mom "Mux mal To Go mama, I love you" I said While Giving my mother a Huge That Felt like an eternity and a soft kiss on the forehead. "Hey Bro you gotta catch the Pray From Now on Its time i Made a living Love you"
I Stammered Tears in my eyes "Now its time for my journey farewell" I walked off in to the forest the same way i came out.

Other:
Skype: Acapela101
Email: Adnan_gman@hotmail.com
P.s Might Not be the best Type Better, However With pen and paper Im better :p
Usually make my poems in my note book.
Sorry for all the random caps and things
And Thanks for reading!
 
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Somnastra

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So funny thing about your bump. If I hadn't known that you were the next on the list (i.e. at the bottom of the unread), this would have made your application be looked at even later.

Staff have a lot of things going on, both IRL and in-game, so sometimes it can take a bit. Have patience.
 

Somnastra

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So your test is a bit... disjointed. Mind trying to make it a bit smoother?
 

Somnastra

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It doesn't flow very well, and seems to assume that I know what you mean (which I don't), making it very confusing.
 

Curonious

Legend of Altera
Where do you feel that, can you give me an example so i can change it throughout the story. Thanks!
 

Somnastra

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As an example, when he tells ... someone? to get down- I thought he was telling the folks he saw to get down.
 

Somnastra

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(You'll also want to make your skin have less obvious jeans~ :D )
 

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Congratulations!

I'm pleased to announce your application has been approved. I hope you enjoy your stay in Altera. Before logging on make sure you read the Survival Guide. It will help you on your way to get established in our World. If you need to know any additional information, everything can be found in our Tome of Citizenship. Make sure you consult either of these two before asking a question ingame.

If you're stuck unable to interact with anything or chat, try using /warp whitelist, if this doesn't work then please message a staff member with the problem.

You are probably eager to jump into the game, so there is no need to read all the links. Just use these as a reference for later.(very useful, by the way.)
Altera survival guide
Tome of Citizenship
Commands
How to create your character profile
How to find a town
Server Rules
How to use titles
Rules for Roleplay
How to use the forum
The Players' Handbook
Lastly, please make sure you understand the following points. It's very important. As a new player, once you play you may be tempted to "test" out an x-ray mod... don't do it! We have a zero tolerance policy for it.

1) We have active members of staff monitoring players suspected of using X-RAY. We have extensive logging capabilities which also highlight to us when X-RAY is suspected. Anyone caught using X-RAY mods or Transparent Texture Packs will be permanently banned without appeal.
2) Anyone found to be griefing our server and subsequently blaming their sibling, friend, dog or any other person other than themselves will be banned irrespective of their innocence.
 
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